The art in this one is once again superb. It seems to be a fairly pleasant part of Betterman doujin. The story while very simple ties into the manga much better than it seems to. The scene is also fairly comprehensive and decent length.

Final Call:
Worth the wait in line.

This is a really good Betterman doujin. It features the most common pairing or Keita and Hinoki.

The story and action are pretty straightforward. Hinoki, for whatever reason, is naked and Keita walks in on her. She collapses on him, scared. Keita decides to take her mind off of her fears, and we all know where that leads. Since Hinoki is already naked, the doujin dives straight into the action. Keita first fingers her before they start having sex.

The art is faithful to the anime, granted that some anatomical features are embellished. The art has very good shading, so you won't have a problem following the action. The censoring in this doujin is unique. Instead of using black bars everywhere, the publishers decided to black out Hinoki's pussy. It may be distressing to see a black void when Hinoki spreads her pussy open, but only the very insides of her pussy is blacked out. The rest is untouched, including Keita's dick, which is an acceptable trade off. There is one cell which shows Keita inside Hinoki, but it's more of a shadow effect than a detailed anatomical cut view. Lastly, there are some drip effects at the end, but nothing too overdone.

Overall, worth the time for a read. There's not much story, but the artwork and makes up for that.