Well if there's one thing you can say about this doujin, it's that the art is top notch. Every character is spot on. Consistency isnt perfect, because at the beginning there's a slight flaw that gets straightened out, so that's a good thing.

In this story, Nemu tries Sakura's trick, but ends up falling and hurting her leg. Then it gets really boring. Nemu and Jyunichi quickly end up having sex. The story, quite frankly, sucked. No real building tension. Heck, even the sex wasnt that great looking. It was more or less just a few large fr­ames. But the art was great!

Art: Wonderful. Perfect. Stupendous. Etc. It was possibly the most accurate art I've ever seen in an actual storyline.

Story: Flat, boring, bad. Past the initial fall, nothing was good. It happened fast, it happened without buildup, and it kind of just happened.

Overall: Look at the pretty pictures. Ignore the story. There's a bit about Sakura in the end, but it says "To Be continued..."