I found this one to be a little out of my normal viewing type. but powering on through it I found it to be both enjoyable and fairly well written. Maybe if the art was a little smoother and had some more to it, prehaps it would rate better. As is its a very strong doujin.

Final Call:
Pretty good, worth a view or ten.

I actually only came across this by chance, thanks to the Random picker. With 26 pages, it was worth looking into. The art is great. It was quite an enjoyable doujin. I may not usually take any time viewing Final Fantasy doujins, but my time with this one was well spent.