This doujin by far is my favorite chi doujin that this site has. Now don't get me wrong I'm not saying this is the best chi doujin, it's just my favorite, now on with the review. The first thing that I like about this doujin is the cover it's the type of cover I like simple but eye-catching all while showing of the art quality of the doujin. That being said I should let you know that chi is drawn much better than Hideki, I'm not saying it's really bad it's just that it doesn't really look like him yes I know that he's not the one the one your looking at but I think if your going to make a doujin that one shouldn't slack on their work. Well anyways back to the review the story like in this doujin is that chi and hideki have sex and that's about it, mean what do you want for 18 pages. That being said it mean that this doujin is just right for a fast flap when the need hits you and unlike some doujin you will find your self coming back to this one time and time again for when you need a chobits fix. overall this is a good pick that is only held back by its lack of storytelling

(Also) my favorite Chi(i)/Chobits doujin to date. The art is both amazingly cute and fitting for this series/pairing.Basically, expect nice, straight, consensual sex between Hideki and Chii. Skipping the first few pics (explained later in review), Hideki and Chii make out, fondle with breasts, followed by a blow job. Then some penetration from behind, before the two climax in each other's arms. Hideki falls asleep, and then wakes up to a smiling Chii.The only problems with the doujin seems to be the lack of a unique plot, and continuity issues, considering the first few pics seems to be an alternative climax. In any case, I can easily overlook its faults. A 4.5/5.

Pairings: Seemingly, Hideki/Chii
Sexual elements: Vaginal and oral intercourse, nice breasts, mild lolicon

The art's all right. Not superb, characters recognizable but not particularly close to original series.
There's a willing suspension of disbelief problem here. Even if we assume the text somehow handles the change, I can see no good reason why the location of Chii's on/off switch would not preclude vaginal intercourse. I'm not saying this presents a serious problem, but it's a huge mark against the creativity of the doujinshi circle. Why not anal? Paizuri? Most anything, really, would show the creativity needed to get more stars on my Story and Overall ratings. It's just... poor, frankly.
That's what it comes to. My concern isn't whether or not it meshes with canon, but whether or not it's so dismissive of canon that it's hard to get my head into the space to view this hentai without objection.

Three stars overall, and maybe less. I'm erring on the side of charity because it's not atrocious, just very, very uninspiring.