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Posted on 06 March 2007, 23:02 UTC by Acryn
A very sweet doujin that I really liked.
For all those who have read the manga it probably takes place when they're doing their first doujin for the convention. There quite a few panels of the day by day process as Sasahara feels uncomfortable with Ogiue, even when he's not alone with her. As the day by day process is shown, it shows Ohno sacrificing herself and using her body to use the Manga Club's PC. The day after is Saki on a park bench eating ice cream on the phone with Ogiue trying to tell her to rest and get the others to work, similar to the manga. What's different is when a panel of Kohsaka between a very flushed Saki's legs comes up and you see her slightly against it but enjoying it nonetheless. The day after Kugayama leaves needing rest and Sasahara, alone with Ogiue nervously comments on her art of the Chairman and how her breasts are as big as Ohno's. This causes Ogiue to tear up and Sasahara guiltly to escort her back home. Once there Ogiue places his hand on her breast asking if he prefers big breasts. This starts a sweet, almost romantic scene of Sasahara saying she is cute which leads to the bedroom. After playing around the cute, soft breasts that he praised so much he starts fingering her until she cums. When she does he blushes and eats her out a little and takes out the condom. Fumbling around with it however he starts getting soft which causes a little embarrassment which Ogiue shyly says she'll take care of. She sucks him off and only pulls away as she gets excited from his fingering and soon start making love. After cumming once he takes off the condom and starts playing around with her again still raring to go. They start again until they cum together. The next day Madarame comments on how tired Sasahara looks, commenting on being kept on all night which as Ogiue listens on, starts blushing. Thats the end of this story and after this are a nice picture of Ogiue, some shorts, a page comic, and credits. First thing I have to say about this is how refreshing it is to have a well done sex scene that isn't just wild monkey sex, rape, or anything that isn't a nice realistic scene of two college kids having sex. The story can be worked into the storyline and adds some nice realism to a story that is already realistic. The nice story of a girl who doesn't think much of herself and the guy who sees what she can't may seem overdone in dramas but I think worked real well here. The art wasn't like the show and made some of the characters look a little weird and took away what made them good like Saki but for the main characters of the doujin, it added very cute qualities, especially Ogiue. This cuteness transferred to the very well done sex scenes which I must also comment on. They weren't quick fuckfests or drawn out scenes that seemed repetitive or out of place but were in good sequence and pace that worked well for a more serious, not quite full blast romantic, but still romantic scene. That grammar for the last bit is really going to have to be checked out. Overall, I enjoyed this very much. Good mix of art and story that meshed very well together. Anyone who can read Japanese, wants to assume what is happening based off my review, or finds a translated version should definitely read this because the art and story together makes this an excellent read. |
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