Hmm... not much to say about this book. The focus is on Luna only, and it seems more like a small hentai game the way the text and pictures are set about.

Luna herself was drawn very well, theother chacters might need a bit of a redesign and the end extras a quite creepy.

Story? There isn't much other then the fact that Luna gets captured somehow and it goes to do the usuall hentai thing.

All and all it's worth a shot.

This is not much astory, buy the artwork is excellent, though.

Here, Lunamaria Hawke is at the mercy of a fellow ZAFT Red Coat Elite. He sucks her breasts, violates her, even from behind.

The dialogue is most print with some of the words like "manko" and some names censored by omitting one Kana syllabary.

Still, it's a nicely illustrated story!

The main focus in this is Luna. Now, overall, this is a pretty good doujinshi. I can't read Japanese myself, but it doesn't seem like there's much of a story to it.
The artwork itself is pretty good. Luna was really well done, but the others seemed like there was less of a design toward them.
I think this would be a good doujinshi for those who can read japanese.