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Posted on 16 May 2007, 17:24 UTC by moonflow
As you could have guessed from the cover, this circle wasn't that great in arts. Such poor artworks are a waste of paper and ink. Spoiled by other circles with gifted artists, the lack of talent wet my eyes. You can recognize the girls because of their faces and hairstyle, but the bodies and the displayed actions didn't match standard.
Fortunately, the story could regain some losts credits. Story Lunamaria in uniform met Miriallia in a bath towel. Miriallia offered a massage and started with Lunamaria's breasts. Onward to manual stimulation of both holes. (Sadly, there were no details. Forget about all details of female inner and outer genitals.) Now Miriallia revealed her status as double-dickgirl, means that she had two dicks to pleasure both holes at the same time. (A little bit of originality. There are few doujinshi featuring this.) After they were done, Meyrin entered the room and after a bit yuri action between the sisters Hawke, Meyrin got her share of Miriallia's two cocks. In the end, the sisters turned into Miriallia's sex slaves. Conclusion The artwork was a great disappointment. The story is good. Therefore, I couldn't condemn the doujinshi on the whole. I don't need it and you shouldn't waste your credit points on it, but it doesn't hurt to read it once.
Posted on 14 July 2008, 22:25 UTC by MLx
The artwork in this doujin is rather dissapointing. The characters aren't draw very well and don't really look like their anime counter parts.
The storyline however, is a bit better, with a proper beggining. Overall, this doujin is not as bad as some others, so you should take a peek at it. |
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