Art:
This doujin is one of the best-looking ones I've seen. The characters all look like they should, and nearly spot-on with the official drawings. It's easy to tell who's who and what they're doing to each other.

The art is crisp and clean, without any unneeded blurriness or major flaws.

Story:
This is one of those doujins where being able to read the language would have really come in handy.

From what I can tell, Haruhi and Kyon have an argument. Then we see her furiously masturbating in the clubroom. The scene switches to Kyon and Mikuru. Kyon is apparently possessed by his baser instincts, then proceeds to strip and then grope Mikuru.

He then leaves, barges in on Haruhi, bends her over the desk and has his way with her. Shortly after he's done, it's over.

Overall:
I have to admit, I liked this one. While it's a little short on action, Haruhi comes across as very vulnerable through the whole thing, and it works for her. Mikuru's jugs aren't horribly oversized, which is also a plus. If you're looking for a quick read that's not too heavy on the hardcore content, you might give this one a try. It's pretty good, IMO.

This one is a rather good one, even out of the many on the site already. It has some of the best art (so close I can almost NOT tell the difference) and its also got a decent story. But the biggest problem is that its rather short, both overall, and in content. But its still got more than enough to be worth your time.