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This is yet another excellent Asuka/Shinji offering by Kohakutei, the same circle who brought you the generally wonderful Eden doujinshi series. The artwork of More! 1 has, in my opinion, slightly improved upon that of the Eden series. There are still some areas of questionable perspective/proportion, but these seem to be more in the vein of intentional artistic choices (foreshortening, for instance) than mistakes.

The Asuka/Shinji pairing from the Eden -Asuka- series has been maintained, but the H-scenes have improved considerably in both quantity and quality. This particular doujinshi also has a feel of almost catering to particularly Japanese perversions (no offence intended)--namely, shinkansen (bullet train) sex and various schoolgirl fantasies, particularly the ubiquitous blue swimsuit. There was also an air of voyeur/exhibitionist fetish in this doujinshi. In my book, however, these are definitely high points!

This doujinshi has it all: great artwork, great sex, and Asuka. What more do you need?

P.S. Almost forget to mention it, but this excellent little foray into Eros takes place in the Alternate Universe created in the twenty-sixth episode of the original Evangelion television series. Just some FYI from a long-time Eva fan.

This is pretty straightforward. It's just a bunch of random scenes of Asuka and Shinji having sex, as often as not in public. First, Asuka wakes up Shinji and gives him a footjob and a blowjob. Then they get off of a subway and have sex in the station, and no one seems to care...then they do it in the bathroom, by the pool, and in a locker room. It's pretty funny at the end. Kaoru shows up and, as far as I can tell, Asuka gets mad at Shinji because she thinks he likes Kaoru more than him. Just a guess, based on the pictures. But then they kiss and make up. Yay. High rating for straight, and...that's actually about the only content rating it needs. I give the art a 4.5, excellent, but there didn't seem to be much story. Then again, I don't read Japanese, so I'll give it the benefit of the doubt. 4 out of 5 for story. And overall, a 4.5. Great doujin.

Well my first thought was this is definitely a circumstance I would love to be in. However, that is aside the point. My extreme rating for straight was because of the lack of anything else. So this is definitely for the faint of heart and will not offend anyone. But there was a little forced action in the beginning and the middle (I won't spoil it) so I gave it a few green bars. The art was great; it was cleaner and cuter than its T.V. original, however not as nice as the new mangas that came out five odd years ago. Personally, I typically do not like cute doujinshis. The story, I could not understand it so I gave it yet another neutral rating.

I have to say, from all the doujins i've see before this is one of the best, and from the Eva's doujin for me the first. This masterpiece is full of actions with quality artwork flavoured. Th story is about Asuka and Shiji and what they are doing day by day, from the awekening of Shinji by Asuka, till the afternoon swimming in the pool, but not so simple and not so pure:).

This doujin shows Asuka and Shinji pairing in the alternate existence as they go through a normal day.

The artwork is excellent, and although there are a few black censor strips, the action is still clear.

There are several sex scenes, from the morning as Shinji wakes, to on the train, in the public restrooms, in swimming pool, etc.

In the final scene, Asuka shows her jealous streak as Shinji sees Kaoru, but in a touching moment, Shinji dispels her doubts. Sweet ending. :p

Even though I couldn't read a lick of Japanese, the story shows itself through the humorous interactions between Asuka and Shinji throughout the doujin. Small details, like Asuka drooling, were picked up on and make each panel solid. Mild foot-play in the beginning was pleasing, and it isn't even one of my fetishes. If there's two things Asuka wears best, it's a swimsuit and an oversexed drool. An overall fine doujinshi; it's just a shame it lacks an english translation.

I'm not a fan of feet, but as a lead off scene it works very well. The rest of the book is where this one really shines. They just look so damn happy together. Some of the scenes are a bit exagerated, but I can get beyond that simply because of page 31. That page is beautiful. It's always good when a page can stand all on it's own, and this is one of them. Fantastic.

To say the thruth I don't speak too much japanese, so I don't understand the kanjis, but who cares, the images are what really counts! The scene of a Asuka-Shinji relation is too old, I think that big boobs and girls being forced, are the best things that can appear in some hentai scenes, but well, that's only my opinion...

i give it 4 stars, really good, should keep creating more like this. im personally is very into evangelion. it really place your in its plot so as the fascinating anime. thers not much that i can say but wish everyone else can enjoy the as well as the real series

Great Doujinshi starring Shinji and Asuka. Starts off with Asuka giving him a foot job while he's asleep. Next they have sex in a train. Later they fuck by the poolside with Asuka wearing a very sexy swimsuit. Overall one of the best doujins ever made. If you like this check out the doujinshi More! 2 by the same artist.

P.S. the art is this is some of the best ever