N647 - Brother CompleX (Ongoing)

Posted on 03 December 2016, 09:44 by: MacKnight

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New comic by N647
https://www.patreon.com/N647?ty=c

Posted on 18 September 2015, 13:50 by: mokko

this reminds me in part of that one mega milk doujin so far

Posted on 18 September 2015, 17:54 by: Soldier A

New comic based on a series of very old pictures.

Posted on 24 September 2015, 00:11 by: Cridel

This is more like the one with the girl with the short hair style who is obsessed with her brother, given she is his little sister. Oh! Imoto by Wamusato Haru. https://e-hentai.org/g/664399/ba8c68fad9/

Posted on 25 September 2015, 02:43 by: Michaelares

Like it so far keep it up👍

Posted on 25 September 2015, 03:44 by: dragonball_z

More please very good keep it up

Posted on 09 October 2015, 01:15 by: Noterrelly

looking forward too more

Posted on 18 November 2015, 23:00 by: dragonball_z

When is the next update?

Posted on 13 March 2016, 22:23 by: shwaggy

Soooooo...Update?

Posted on 23 March 2016, 07:48 by: 5thsin

He has been updating the comic here for anyone who's been waiting for an update: http://tapastic.com/series/Brother-Complex

Posted on 04 May 2016, 08:51 by: muad-dib57

This is some distilled-ass weeaboo trash right here. Fun to look at, though.

Posted on 13 May 2016, 17:04 by: olbrigr

36 pages and nothing even close to sex, or nudity. Are we sure this doesn't belong in Non-H?

Posted on 13 May 2016, 20:30 by: blob270

#unexpectedleague

Posted on 06 June 2016, 21:36 by: MikinTodo

And a Page 12 Cop-out for incest. At least it wasn't right at the end like some like to do.

Posted on 06 June 2016, 21:41 by: Harrys

Precioso manga, buen contenido, arte perfecto, historia envolvente, una heeerrrmanoooota, mmmm deliciosa, me encanta porfa suban mas.

Posted on 26 June 2016, 14:38 by: dfjhgdi

I actually dig this. Now I want a sister complex o.o!
Needs work on the spelling though

Posted on 13 July 2016, 16:37 by: Medra

Get a proofreader please. That english is horrible.

Posted on 13 July 2016, 20:07 by: Klondikes

These faces have got me rolling.
This dude cannot draw them to save his life and it shows.

Posted on 13 July 2016, 22:00 by: mac77

I would have liked to see some amazon on smaller guy action, instead I basically got non hentai.

Posted on 14 July 2016, 05:05 by: DracosBlackwing

This actually made me laugh, it was so cheezily predicable. Kinda cute, actually, and I didn't even get to the sex parts. xD Also, good god someone get that girl some clothes in her size! ....wait. Don't. x3

Posted on 17 August 2016, 04:40 by: stolhanske

even skypin grades

Posted on 17 August 2016, 09:47 by: ulquiora88

No Sex, no nudity, Piece of shit.

Posted on 23 August 2016, 05:26 by: Cridel

Good job, keep up the work.

Posted on 01 September 2016, 01:41 by: hmmmmmmm

So its not porn? The faces are rough, it speaks in weabanese (everything english except for generic jap/weeb terms.) and there has been literally no character progression with it being one big anime cliche after the other. (who the fuck rates this thing so highly the only enjoyment you could get out of it is maybe big girls and extreme cringe every two pages.)

Posted on 01 September 2016, 13:06 by: masturbear

don't think you could fit anymore onii-chans<3 if you tried

Posted on 04 September 2016, 18:42 by: winged_immortal

The fact that this has such a high rating baffles me. And the number of copies of the same page uploaded is bordering on satirical.

Posted on 01 October 2016, 00:52 by: The Vexel

This makes me a little sad as an anime fan. God I hate when people use buzzwords that have meaning but are now lost in the typical weeaboo vocab.

Posted on 02 October 2016, 13:46 by: JohnSmith0128

Soooo.........why are there so many duplications?

Posted on 07 October 2016, 09:04 by: notapervdesu

Is there a reason to post the unfinished pages and the finished pages together?

Posted on 08 October 2016, 18:51 by: theword101

1/2 star

Thats all we give it

Posted on 04 November 2016, 15:18 by: Bookrat15

This sister is so annoying.-.- I just ship Jack with Megan so Rose is heart broken or something.

Posted on 04 November 2016, 19:34 by: yoyoyo30

Damn. I thought this was a bakemonogatari doujin from the silhouettes on the front page.

Posted on 04 November 2016, 22:29 by: MexicanMau

The yandere tag doesnt fit here.
yandere are characters who are violently insane in their affection for another person. unless someone threatens to kill the guy unless they date them, then this isnt yandere

Posted on 05 November 2016, 09:42 by: mombastical

Maybe we you should reorder the gallery, so that all the old draft pages are at the back instead??

Posted on 03 December 2016, 14:25 by: piston

The fucking build up is too long, giving me BLUE DRAGONBALLZ here!!! I want to cummehamehAAAAAAAAA already :-)

Posted on 03 December 2016, 14:31 by: Krugger

The yuri flower blooms

YESSSSS

Posted on 03 December 2016, 14:55 by: JJ_Zalem

JUST. FUCK. ALREADY!

Posted on 19 January 2017, 23:17 by: PregnantWhoreFucker

She grew two feet in a year? People with gigantism don't grow that fast! XD

Posted on 20 January 2017, 18:59 by: AEK-971

*reading* ... *figuring out the situation pretty fast* ... *checking tags*
Ugh. Yandere... Where's the blood and kills then, huh?

Posted on 22 January 2017, 06:44 by: Z-Byte

Retagging as Non-H...

Posted on 15 February 2017, 18:46 by: Harrys

Genial esta de lujo men

Posted on 15 February 2017, 20:39 by: Pelleelle

P84
Oh that's kinda cold :o

Posted on 16 February 2017, 05:46 by: Chup@Cabra

Although the art style is good, this does seem to be pure soft core (no nudity [at least in the few pages I saw]), and certainly no sex.

Posted on 15 March 2017, 07:08 by: adallam107

Drop the other shoe!

Almost a hundred pages of tease, whew.

Last edited on 25 October 2017, 17:02.

Posted on 08 June 2017, 13:01 by: gboy64

BOO, ADOPTED BROTHER COP OUT! BOOOOOO!
No courage.

Posted on 08 June 2017, 18:48 by: Mr.Sal

there will never ever be any smut, right?

Posted on 11 June 2017, 18:45 by: fakeuser002

As a support main I'm triggered when people think any noob can just pop in and go support >__>

Posted on 24 July 2017, 20:35 by: JoseFett

So... Where's the sex?

Posted on 16 September 2017, 17:36 by: IgotSWEG

I'm just tryna see a titty

Posted on 27 October 2017, 16:08 by: ArsonAverage

I’m I the only one that hates her character. She’s the Mary Sue of all Mary Sues. Perfect in everyday and EVERYONE loves her. Hell she could kill someone and no one would care! This is just me but I just don’t find any appeal in this

Posted on 31 October 2017, 11:19 by: aku27

Good job!!
keep going!
Thanks

Posted on 19 November 2017, 09:57 by: XXrytd

Frankly,this plot is going to be awkward·····

Posted on 20 January 2018, 06:32 by: the phantom limb

I agree with the sentiment that she's just *too much*. It's basically impossible to connect to her, as she doesn't present as anything remotely resembling an actual person. So my sympathies ended up staying completely with the poor, long-suffering meganekko childhood friend (who could probably do much better than the onii-chan anyway).

Posted on 28 January 2018, 19:06 by: wiirush0

When are you going to add more I love it so far

Posted on 14 February 2018, 15:03 by: kanmurimoriyasushi

投错区啦吧！

Posted on 25 February 2018, 21:08 by: Frig84

Maybe Meagan and Jack are become unwilling participants in some experiments

Posted on 01 April 2018, 03:10 by: addabug

did the plot just jump the shark in the span of 3 pages?

Posted on 02 April 2018, 06:38 by: MexicanMau

@addabug it sure as hell did. honestly dont care for suddenly super spy bs

Posted on 22 April 2018, 14:36 by: Sylvrwolflol

Honestly I'm just hoping Megan gets some of that "secret syrum" and we get the cat fight of all cat fights between her and Rose. And maybe then Rose will either fuck off or grow up.

Posted on 01 May 2018, 03:42 by: Mr .Pink

So now you know that your step-sister, who has an unhealthy obsession with you, gives you yandere eyes whenever see you with another woman and guilt-trip you when you call her out about that, is also a super soldier with super strength, intelligence and probably knowledge of hand-to-hand combat and firearms.

The father already won the razzie for worst actor going from "I will explain you what is happening" to "WHAT OTHER OPTION I HAD?!" from one panel to the other.
Not to mention the
- FRANK!
- why not ...."dad" ?

Posted on 17 May 2018, 21:15 by: GLKnight

Okay, there's being a big brother, and then there's just being a dumb idiot who blithely accepts everything everyone tells him he should. I swear to Christ, if the brother doesn't get to a point where he screams "GO FUCK YOURSELVES! I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS BULLSHIT!" and walks from everything forever...

Posted on 18 May 2018, 03:20 by: justin878

that has got to be the hardest left turn i have ever seen in a comic on this site, bravo.

Posted on 11 June 2018, 06:16 by: Nintyfresh

Can someone just fuck now please?

Posted on 25 July 2018, 17:15 by: colo281

Re class this as Non-H

Posted on 25 July 2018, 23:37 by: Sylvrwolflol

Fun fact: Rose’s code name is Mary Sue.

Posted on 20 August 2018, 21:44 by: Haloya

If there's not gonna be any giantess growth, BE, AE, WG, incest, or literally anything that would make this remotely interesting since this Mary-Sue-esque plot surely isn't enough to hold its ground, then why the fuck does this exist?

161 images later and I'm still clueless as to what the hell is happening or even going to happen.

Posted on 07 October 2018, 13:15 by: piston

When is the fucking going to start this bullshit is dragging out too long, HOW MUCH OF A FUCKING TEASE IS THIS SERIES GOING TO BE!!!!

Posted on 08 October 2018, 17:58 by: PaiRho

This is all a massive useless tease. 169 pages of jack and shit.

Posted on 15 October 2018, 14:47 by: buddahec

I keep expecting an interesting plot twist or a tug on the heart strings but it never seems to happen.
It started out so strongly. Being her size has to be taking SOME sort of toll on her right?

Posted on 08 December 2018, 07:46 by: Wb1

have they had sex yet

Posted on 22 December 2018, 16:01 by: Evil Emperor Proteus

I'm just here for those hips and thighs and big fuckin' titties.

Posted on 04 February 2019, 22:45 by: StratoSquir

wtf is even going on anymore?
actually, who is this even for anymore?

cuz i'm pretty sure even the degenerates into giant-bimbo with giant-tits aren't gonna bother reading all that shit since the artstyle is trash,
same for the incest fans, they wouldn't read that shit anyway since their relationship never showed any progress at all
and nones of them would give a shit about the "plot" even if there was one to begin with anyway...

Posted on 06 February 2019, 07:02 by: MexicanMau

honestly the art isnt bad, but the writing is so fucking terrible

Posted on 26 March 2019, 18:15 by: Haloya

Any page you turn to makes about as much sense as any other, which is to say, none at all. It's a shame because I can tell he's getting better and better at drawing, but I think he should stick to porn, vignettes, and stills because writing is CLEARLY not his strong suit.

Posted on 16 May 2019, 09:45 by: xXBakkiXx

looks ok, but stopped after she said onii-chan like 6 times in a page, it's good for siscons not me

Posted on 23 June 2019, 01:29 by: Tristail

I appreciate the wholesome brother complex, but it gets pretty annoying when literally every sentence she says contains "onii-chan".
EDIT: I just realized, she doesn't actually have a brother complex. She has a weeaboo complex that's so deeply ingrained in her that she's convinced herself she has a brother complex.
1) She calls him nothing but "onii-chan", even in public. She doesn't even say "you" early in the story when proper grammar calls for it. Meanwhile, he calls her "sister".
2) Page 19, she says "imouto senses tingling". It's ingrained itself so deep in her mind that she calls herself "imouto" instead of "little sister". It'd be more of a brother complex if she did the latter, instead of the former.
3) She gives her brother practically no opening to even think about refuting her advances. She's not thinking about loving him, she's thinking about satisfying her own fantasies. Those "fantasies" likely being the stuff she read/watched.
It could be manga/anime/lewds that got her into the complex, but it could have also been a brother complex that her friend (coughwhorecough) encouraged to have/continue. Either way, I personally don't think it's a real "brother complex".

Last edited on 23 June 2019, 03:39.

Posted on 23 June 2019, 03:55 by: thatguy26

When someone gonna grab a bit dang tiddie already?!

Posted on 15 July 2019, 19:44 by: makutamon

I think this might need some cleaning up.

Posted on 02 August 2019, 04:53 by: Anybdy

I literally, come back just to read the comments to see if they banged or not.
See you in a month!

Posted on 17 August 2019, 18:30 by: nuggistrike

iq over 300 ! and still no on in school see what happen to the girls ? groving 50 cm taller and have boobs like beach ball in only 1 day ? and she think no on will figur it out ? dos secret experiment means anything ? and her dad dont have a clu his daughter keep stealing the drugs ?

Posted on 17 August 2019, 20:14 by: Medan74

Why is this not labeled as Non-H?
Serious question

Posted on 23 September 2019, 11:35 by: Asmo Deus

Well, there's at least a little growth of a new girl to get off to if you're into that. Would've been hotter if this author/artist showed more of her over the growth process, and I'm all for the art of the tease but.. this is wayyyy too tame, this is pretty much just a home-made ecchi doujin, hell, it's even tamer than a lot of those crappy ecchi rom/com anime/manga.
All it has going for it is the 7ft curvaceous girls and the growth of them into hourglass Amazons (which we've only seen once even though there's 3 of them, and it'd be nice if there was some differences in the sizes they grow to/their proportions, rather than being clones of with other with different hairstyles and clothes) Her brother is like.. just a half-step above an eunuch, seriously, where's his balls?

In terms of plot/story, it's okay, nothing amazing. Only thing you'll do by reading this, so far at least (currently at 202 pages), is get blue balls. Don't even expect softcore action.

Posted on 16 October 2019, 05:11 by: addabug

So like the art is great and all. But are we ever going to see a nipple?

Posted on 16 October 2019, 23:10 by: starmanic96

I have one big problem about this story and that's that rose is just...the biggest Mary sue I've ever seen. she's a genius, she's super athletic (even though she should trip over her own boob weight every 5 minutes.) she's basicly a super soldier for no God damn reason other than to give her sudden size change an explanation. I would rather have it stay unexplained than get a shitty reason as to why she's so big. And honestly her father couldn't think of any other way to save his daughter than "oh let's give her this super experimental super serum and see if that works." but what I hate most about all of this has to be how she's so disgustingly aware of how hot she's become and how easily she can get stuff. (see the Valentine's page. where she got a toooon of chocolate form basicly all the guys and then when they ask where she got it all form she just says. "oh no one inportant" thats 1. fucking disgusting behaviour 2. incredibly selfish. all this coupled with her being good at littelary EVERYTHING just makes her come off as annoying and irritating. and when Jack yelled at her for slapping that girl I can't remember the name off she basicly guilt trips him and when I read it she didn't come off as sad to me it felt like she was guilt tripping jack to get what she wanted. and as I saw another comment on here say. I don't think she actually has a brother concept. it's more that something is so ingrained in her mind that she thinks she needs one. in short. she's basicly a super soldier with what I can only describe as a psychosis. one i have no doubt was caused by her near death and then revival or what ever. or that's what it would be if this story had any good writing. now I know you might be thinking. "why are you taking your time to criticise something that's basicly porn?" well to that I say this. while I read this and the comments It just made me so mad I had to do it.

lastly I just want to give a small tip to any writer. (yes even porn writers) don't make your charcter a mary sue unless you intend to make some sort of twist. in this story I feel like the super spy thing was extreamly uneccecary and just made rose even more unbearable to me. however I do like Jack and Megan the only two characters that had...well character. Especially that Megan refused roses offer about the serum. that's some strong charcter right there. and if the story is headed the way I think it is. well Megan is going to cave in and take roses offer. and I won't like that.

I doubt anyone will read this far but who knows. if you did. thanks I guess. and sorry if anything was misspelled or any werid grammar. English is not my first language so I tried my best.

tl,dr
biggest Mary sue I've ever seen. super soldier sister for no reason. makes me mad

unless the story makes a twist about the whole serum and brother complex thing I won't continue reading it.

Posted on 23 October 2019, 00:46 by: gftrym

I wanna that sister

Posted on 26 October 2019, 19:19 by: nuggistrike

dragoness / sister use boob neck snap ! critical dammage

Posted on 20 January 2020, 20:16 by: DogStreet

Besides the long comments above...

For some unknown reason, I see a lot of potential with how the story is evolving. I have the feeling that (besides the harem atmosphere), all this girls becoming amazon-like could become some kind of Delta Team or something (if you are inclined to action stuff, just saying)..Besides that, I like the whole "oniiiiiiiiiiiiiiichan" theme everytime. Is true, is so annoying that you end up kinda liking it. n647, please, keep it up. This is the kind of stuff I would pay for.

Posted on 20 January 2020, 23:09 by: Aljhaqu

In real life, a character such as Rose would be a manipulative and toxic relative. Call me hater, but I would love if he story showed some of the consequences in Rose's actions, therefore giving a plot to advance. Because, let's be real, such technology would come from a National military program, and would be zealously guarded and inspected. Which means that two new subjects, augmented outside of the program facilities would raise some suspicions. Which in turn, could bring some problems to Frank and his family...

Posted on 29 January 2020, 09:13 by: Wb1

hey just checking in has anyone had sex yet

Posted on 01 April 2020, 19:47 by: RigenZ

Well...It seems they finaly are getting to have some sex. Maybe xd
And i guess Megan will cave in for that sweet serum, after seeing that Rose and Jack can get a little bit too close.

Posted on 02 April 2020, 02:24 by: miroku888

This is annoying to read. It keeps building like the MC will do SOMETHING with one of the female characters, and then nothing happens. Repeatedly.
Its BORING. Even softcore sex would have been more exciting. Teasing incest and then never having the balls to just get it over with is annoying as hell, especially when the female lead is just pure walking fanservice. Why have her look like a godamned amazon pornstar if she's going to do absolutely NOTHING but stand there and look hot!? Waste of time.

Posted on 02 April 2020, 17:05 by: Red 255

this does appear to go at a snails pace. girl is 7'1'' boy is 5'8'' because her father gave her some super soldier serum/FEV.

I'm expecting 1.) people to have sex or 2.) people to get bigger.

Onii chan does not want to have sex with his not-blood related giant sister because that would be weird. so we go nowhere for the duration well a bunch of pages are redraws for some reason so its not that long.

but yeah, eventually we get 3 giant ladies apparently. but so far I I can tell nothing sexual. little bit of DnD. going to say this is non-H.

Posted on 24 April 2020, 00:20 by: thisisveryupsetting

Look, I'm not saying anything about the art, I think it's fine, but jesus christ is this just a fucking mess. It's a 200 pages long fucking cocktease where absolutely nothing happens for the entirety of the comic. miroku888 has a point, it's just fucking boring.

Posted on 18 May 2020, 22:53 by: Hitt

Thing that gets me is Megan is perfectly fine looking and would have no trouble attracting any guy, but because Jack is insane I guess you just know that eventually she's going to give in and bimbofy herself like the others.

I mean, at least if we're going that route, we get some detail on the changes/growth/transformation? That would at least provide SOME excitement.

Posted on 22 May 2020, 06:20 by: hjy2187418

At this point this is just a artwork collection, you can block off all the text and have a much better viewing experience.

Posted on 01 August 2020, 15:09 by: Cinj

On which page does the coitus start, kind sirs?

Posted on 01 August 2020, 18:00 by: Hitt

@Cinj I'm thinking never. It's just one long comic of blue balls neverending; playing with that tired harem trope.

Posted on 01 August 2020, 22:40 by: DarkShadow6

I hope this next scene with vulnerable Rose actually has some meaning. if not, this whole comic is just one long worthless pile.
Art is okay but has a lot of werid issues, writing is alright but also has a lot of weird isues, plot is etc.
it's just all so acceptably mediocre, and I feel like this is the last chance to turn it around.

Posted on 02 August 2020, 05:33 by: Invisibull Girl

Comment section: nooo you can't just make a porn comic with no sex also the writing is dumb and the main character is a marysue there's no way i can fap to this they should be fucking this is stupid

Me: haha tits go boing

Posted on 02 August 2020, 05:49 by: msgameandnsfw

I think what ultimately bothers me most is just how selfish and manipulative Rose is throughout the story. It's explained that the process to make her huge also increased her intelligence, but it clearly didn't do anything to her maturity. She wants to be with her bro, and nothing will stop her from getting him, not even his own discomfort with the scenario. Her obsessive single-minded focus with being with him isn't healthy for anyone involved, even aside from the incestual sibling element, and the moment later on when their mother says she wants them to be together really threw me off. Like, I don't necessarily expect good morals and perfectly healthy relationships out of the stuff on this site, but without any actual sexy moments all that's left to contemplate on is how absolutely messed up Rose's behavior is, and how the narrative basically lets her do whatever she wants on account of her being hot I guess. Quite frankly, I hope she doesn't end up with him by the end of all this, and has to learn how to be her own person. It wouldn't satisfy the sexual teasing that's been set up, but it sure would provide some catharsis in that her manipulative behavior would be stopped and improved upon.

Posted on 03 August 2020, 03:59 by: DarkShadow6

@msgameandnsfw
It's like I said: this is the first time Rose is actually visibly vulnerable. This is the chance for her to realize her wrongdoing.

Posted on 15 November 2020, 16:28 by: nuggistrike

245 ! and the sharks swin arund there pray ! dead by snu snu ! MMmmmm !

Posted on 16 November 2020, 05:13 by: Flektobara

... He's gonna get raped, isn't he?

Posted on 16 November 2020, 05:47 by: Nintyfresh

It's been years, I wouldn't count on it starting any time soon.

Posted on 16 November 2020, 18:31 by: shads155

This comic is awesome, I read it in one sitting

Posted on 30 December 2020, 18:40 by: The Liar Time

The finale got released.

Posted on 31 December 2020, 02:20 by: addabug

I feel like I got blue balled reading a comic with massive tiddies yet nothing done with them

Last edited on 31 December 2020, 05:40.

Posted on 31 December 2020, 05:23 by: miroku888

That's it!? THAT'S THE ENDING!?

What a waste of time. NOTHING that got set up had any payoff. Turning the other girls into amazons meant NOTHING. The constant incest teasing meant NOTHING. The ending was rushed and lazy. The MC showing attraction to his best friend at the end felt super forced.

This was trash.

Posted on 31 December 2020, 06:30 by: DarkShadow6

yeah... that vulnerability I was talking about... turns out everyone suddenly loves Rose and forgives her for anything and everything so she doesn't have to learn any lessons at all. what a piece of shit story.

Posted on 31 December 2020, 08:14 by: a84

So 254 pages, years of waiting and no sex. Great.

Posted on 01 January 2021, 00:15 by: occo

With some tweaks to rose the story wuold have been way better, the way it is the story is just cringe worthy boobies in your face and pressuring your close family to do only what you do want, it's garbage.

If at least they had sex the cringe would be an excuse to push the sex, but there isn't even that.

Posted on 01 January 2021, 02:32 by: starmanic96

Well the ending is out and as I feared this didn't improve at all. Rose ended up being forgiven by everyone with no repercussions for her actions. the ending ended on a what feels like a cliffhanger/sequel bait with not showing Megan fully at the last screen and jack blushing like crazy. the only thing that could have been worse was if Rose got Jack wich she thankfully didn't. oh and the fact that nothing ever happend that is anywhere remotely close to porn is a shame. the story had potential once but no more. almost a years wait for basicly nothing.

Posted on 01 January 2021, 07:03 by: NightLillith

Did anyone else just want Jack to say "Rose and Megan are fine, but I barely know you two. Sorry, I can't do the harem thing" or at least occasionally tell Rose to give him some space when he's doing pretty much anything without Rose.

Rose seems to fucking butt her way into everything. He can't even say "Yeah, I need some privacy for like 20 minutes. You've been hanging around me like a bad smell ever since I got off the plane and I'd feel really awkward doing what I want to do with you hanging around" because Rose would then offer to give him a hand (or a mouth) with it. I bet that when he goes to take a piss, Rose offers to hold it for him.

If it is revealed that Megan took the sloot serum in the sequel, I will be disappoint.

Posted on 02 January 2021, 07:54 by: Invisibull Girl

Just as a reminder to the author: there are literal thousands of porn comics with way dumber plots than this one. The only reason we're all tearing the story apart so hard is because THIS NEVER ACTUALLY TURNED INTO PORN. You can get away with a lot of bad writing if theres actual sex involved, but if theres no sex then all we have left is the story, which is why we're calling bullshit.

Your art is pretty good, and you clearly have a desire to do this. Just try to practice writing and story building more if you're going to keep making these kinds of comics. Otherwise... Get your characters to fuck next time.

Posted on 10 January 2021, 22:52 by: onemoment1985

This series is stupid wish forfilment, and a little boring, but I respect the author for going with it. He wants a generic brother with like, 3 big tittied sisters? Good for him, he did it. His gallery of single images is more tolerable though.

Posted:	2016-12-03 09:44
Parent:	993100
Visible:	No (Replaced)
Language:	English
File Size:	180.8 MiB
Length:	72 pages
Favorited:	2336 times

language:	english
artist:	n647
female:	age progression big breasts breast expansion femdom giantess growth huge breasts tall girl
mixed:	incest inseki
other:	story arc western non-h

Rating:		717
Average: 4.05