re edited by my
and thanks to hungryhobo
to translate

si tu idioma es ingles pero sabes español y no tienes como editarlo los mangas que yo subo
estonces traduselo aqui y yo despues lo re edito al ingles para que lo disfrutes tanto como tu y los demas
(Mi ingles es un asco por eso pido ayuda y creo que tambien guilty03458 no sabe ingles)

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Did you really have to go and watermark every single page? Who am I supposed to fap to, Gardevoir or fucking DONKEY KONG?

Last edited on 26 February 2016, 04:46.

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Forgot a few pages at the end too.

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No this does not expand dong!

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I tried I really really did but just couldn't jack to this not enough there

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Hey, its very cool of you to put it in. If you want to message me about other spanish -> english translations I can help out, as long as there isn't already an english version here on the site. sorry if this translation is still a bit awkward, I didn't proof read it all so its a bit rough around the edges but it sounds much better.

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Hmm let's try a basic QC.

Page 01 and 02 Mega Gardevoir or Mega-Gardevoir ?
Page 03 deven -> even ; Mega Gardevoir or Mega-Gardevoir ?
Page 04 dont -> don't ; gardevoir -> Gardevoir ; remove the 'even' in the last panel
Page 05 dont -> don't ; mega-gardevoir -> Mega Gardevoir or Mega-Gardevoir (at least choose the same writing as in 8)
Page 06 isnt -> isn't ; Make -> make
Page 07 o -> to
Page 08 mega gardevoir -> Mega Gardevoir or Mega-Gardevoir
Page 09 master -> Master
Page 14 pokemon league -> Pokémon League ; Yah!! -> Yeah!! (and without the extra spanish exclamation marks) ; cant -> can't ; master -> Master; maybe change the elite four to Elite Four
Page 15 gardevoir -> Gardevoir

Maybe the Master writing is not necessary, but it's like a first name in that context

The worst of it all is it's missing four extra story pages (also missing in the spanish translation).

Last edited on 04 December 2020, 17:16.

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Tengo la version en español pero si quieres te paso los PSD
para que se editen

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@Antonio

If you need higher-quality source files, I do plan to make a hi-res scan of my copy of this work in the near future. If you PM me your email or other contact info, I can link you a copy of the raw TIFF or PSD files when they become available. I think you're also aware, I have and intend to scan a number of other Royal Moon doujin, which you have shown interest in before.

I can also help with a Spanish -> English translation, as well as editing and typesetting the English version, if you can send me the script as you translated it from the original Japanese.

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This is pretty great (despite the obnoxious watermark)

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Noob has fairy type and can't even beat a dragon

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Fuck yea donkey kong hentai !

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Damn I accidentally downvoted the DK tag, if someone could re add it

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Rough grammar
p3: and seen -> ever seen (?)
p3: accept the fact -> accepts the fact
p4: shes -> she's
p11: I can feel to -> I can feel it
p14: cant -> can't
p14: no word -> no words
p14: you make? -> you making?(?)
p14: master steel -> steel master
p15: there's ... be -> there'd ... be
p15: make thing -> make things
p15: master and you gardevoir -> Master and his gardevoir

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