My first attempt guys :)

Hey, its not bad for a first attempt. Promising idea, and the models are actually quite decent, especially for a beginner. That said, the text -desperately- needs some proofreading, and to be centered better in the speech bubbles. As is, there are an almost impressive number of misspellings. With more practice and polish, this could be quite decent. Don't be discouraged by the low rating this got, take the criticism and make the next one better!

Base +9, masterzelda123 +6, stuper +8, Inky AK +6, Uninspired_Gentleman +6, Balticavenuerent +7, Netto +6, just_for_fappin +6, Linearal +6

yeah it's ok, but the boobs need to be much bigger! Well that's just a personal taste.

Base +7, venomr +6

I love the concept, I wish the boobs were more rounded though, keep at it and it's hot so far

Base +6