This jumps around a little too much, but, it seems like it has a solid story.

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Pacing? What's that?

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"What?...What's going on?!"

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Well that's one shitty story here...

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What in the fuck is being written here?

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Extremely tame for Ubermonkey.

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that was pretty funny lol

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Serious case of slackjaw syndrome going on in this comic.

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