"I'm bring another load into the daughter ship I'm pinch it down until gets stuck with this gun!"
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What?

Those may be English words but it is most definitely NOT an English translation.

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Even if this is not your fetish, you have to admit those perfectly round and smooth asses are works of art.

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Why has no one given it the bad grammar tag yet?

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>Why has no one given it the bad grammar tag yet?
Too busy fapping. But man that sure was a pain to read.

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"I've been turned on by your rust" - We need a new tag for rust fetish.

"lets particulate the matter" - I intend to use this as an euphamism for screwing in come-ons, every chance I get. I expect it will be especially effective at recycling centers.

[EDIT]: @jessica702 - The tag requires a comment laying out at least ten grammatical errors for every 40 pages, according to the wiki. I assume that is why it was removed - we have been having fun with it, but noone has written out a full list.

To be honest, the machine translation has made some of these lines so bizzare, the only people qualified to correct it at this point are the ones who can read the japanese. Even a simple "Uo!" exclaimation has been machine-literalized to "Fish!" in this script.

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Google would've been a more accurate translator, honestly.

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I'm saving this just for the epic translation.

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That moment simply reading the words of a translation physically hurts you and causes you to cringe like nobodies business. >_< XD

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>Im put a real number on you now
no, please not the math

@Fate Averruncus
Hurts? cringe?
personally I think the translation is so bad it's actually funny

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1019189/d1ae303176/

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To be honest, I was wondering for 15 solid minutes if I have ED already...
then I see poor grammar tag...

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Haven't read it, but based on the comments, i don't mind waiting for someone to translate it without seeing the 'poor grammar' tag.

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A for Effort.

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"Admiral chumming it in me!!"

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The artist is top notch, but the translation is very poor. I couldn't understand what was being said. I really wanted to read this, but could not get more than three pages into it before I gave up. I will wait for a better translation.

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''Nothing else excites me more than your sweet pussy kashima not even hamakaze''
Excuse me but that's totally Rude !!!

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These are some delicious looking asses. Look amazing in those pantyhose.

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I'm going to go ahead of say it: CGRascal is a better translator; at least he doesn't bungle such simple plots

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Feels like a machine translation. So the cancer afflicting Chinese novels is now also destroying hentai too. Alas.

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"The tag poor grammar has been vetoed on this gallery; it is an incorrect tag."

You bloody what mate.

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D U W A N G

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What did I just read LOL

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Damn good stuff, thanks for contributing :)

For tagging, please don't tag this with the "poor grammar" tag if you don't know what you're doing (or are too fucking lazy to abide by the rules) :)

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/poor_grammar

"A gallery comment MUST exist which DETAILS the mistakes otherwise the tag is INVALID."

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Page 2 Atleast instead of at least. "The black tights are the dream of all men" really poorly worded. "Please for God's sake stay in my commodore." Commodore is a naval rank doesn't make sense here.

Page 3 "Oh it's Hamakaze with forbidden tights shall not be told.." just what? I have no idea what that means. "Wear bangs under tights" again makes no sense.

Page 4 "Hamakaze-san I'll lend you today for this motor" More gibberish. "Admiral why are you such cuckoo?" instead of "Admiral why are you so cuckoo". "Hamakaze are you not full aware that I'm not wearing underwear!?" has full aware instead of fully aware.

Page 5 "Fish!" makes zero sense

Page 7 "I've been turned on by your rust admiral" "Hamakaze-san tights will be yours" I assume lust instead of rust and Hamakaze-san's tights will be yours makes more sense. "I will excuse myself into this" kinda gibberish

Page 8 "This is punishment for you admiral-san for every given time" gibberish. "That your tights giving such pressure throughout my whole body!!" poorly written run on from the previous panel.

Page 9 "I will provide you two whole new life" gibberish. "Before we take off...shall we wait?" I don't even know what that means.

Page 10 "Even if you were schoolgirl everyone will hammer you down" even if you were A schoolgirl. "Such tactful admi..." would read better as such tact or so tactful

Page 11 "While...then it just painful that Im the only one not being touched by such hardship" more gibberish and missing apostrophe in I'm

Page 12 "Admiral! Overhere too!" over here. "Wait a moment and I will do it well properly Kashima" pick one, well or properly

Page 13 "Was it light for you I'm wondering? Im put a real number on you now" gibberish and no apostrophe

Page 14 "Please do not compare Hamakaze with mine admiral!" could be please do not compare Hamakaze's pussy with mine admiral. "Going check on how sensitive you are." going to check.

Page 15 "So it your turn now Hamakaze" So it is your turn Hamakaze.

Page 16 "Oh that's it lets particulate the matter" I don't even know, gibberish. "Maybe I know how to get admiral to feel good! More like this" How to get to feel good isn't proper English.

Page 17 "I'm bring another load into the daughter ship I'm pinch it down until gets stuck with this gun" absolute gibberish.

Page 20 "I've became addicted to playing with admiral with our tights" I've become addicted to.

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All I can say is God bless Devindor for making a list of the mistakes, thereby making the "poor grammer" tag valid. I also liked reading his comments for all the mistakes. Got some good laughs from trying to read this translation and got even more laughs reading Devindor's comments on them. I think I'll stick to the Japanese version of this, it makes a whole lot more sense. Even if I knew no Japanese, I'd still stick to the Japanese version. I'm just getting confused trying to decide this one. Also I've noticed that skimming the Japanese one, they make sooo many mistakes...
For instance, "Admiral why are you such cuckoo?" Is actually closer to something like "Admeral, why have you taken such a pose?". Sorry if my Japanese is a bit rusty...It's my second language, not my first.

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