Thanks for the improvement. This one has good x-ray pics on p. 11, 13, 20 and 22. The artwork is pretty good, with lots of movement especially in the 'scenes'. I enjoyed reading this.
So Alice have a puppet of herself or just a puppet? Not sure which one is the right answer... Aside of that pretty nice touhou one (by now i think touhou has defeated KanCole by a far margin of H dous,dont?)
impregnation: "Should be obviously relevant to the story, not just whenever someone ejaculates inside a woman." "Either visual or verbal proof is needed; verbal needs to assert that the character actually is pregnant, and not simply expressing a wish to become so. "
stop tagging everything as impregnation!
Base +5, ktaguri13 -9, you are pants -10, lazorboy96 -6
^ he remove Alices contraception spell. The only reasaon to do so is for impregnate her. It is people like you who doesn't think much that cause us problem in tagging.