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[Mahouya] Warau Kanoke | Laughing Coffin (Sword Art Online) [English] [Ichini-ni]

[魔法屋] 笑う棺桶 (ソードアート・オンライン) [英訳]

Artist CG
Posted:2017-03-06 12:32
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Language:English  TR
File Size:9.78 MiB
Length:8 pages
Favorited:649 times
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Posted on 06 March 2017, 12:32 by:   Ichini-ni    PM
Uploader Comment
My first attempt to upload and translate something.
Sorry that it looks like shit compared to most other translations, imo.
If anyone has specific improvements in mind please tell them to me since I'm not completely satisfied with it either.
I'm especially uncontent with the text color I chose for Asuna. I really wanted to keep it a tone of orange to stay true to the character and also the artist but I think that it just isn't a very reader friendly choice here when it sometimes overlaps with Asunas orange hair.

I really learned to appreciate all the translators by attempting to do this by myself.
It took me almost six hours just to translate the text into english as faithful as possible even though this gallery has only 8 pictures since my knowledge of written japanese is absolutely pathetic.

Anyway, I wanted to upload this because I'm a pretty huge fan of the corruption, mind break and NTR genres and seeing Asuna in paticular experience those is even better for me.
Besides that I just didn't think that anyone else would ever translate this.

There is a second part of this by the same artist with a corrupted futanari Asuna fucking and corrupting Lizbeth as well and I may eventually translate that too when I feel like it.
But it's just not as thrilling to me as this part because I personally don't like the futanari genre that much.
So I'm not that motivated about it.

Source:
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56845621
You obviously need a pixiv account to view it.
Posted on 06 March 2017, 15:43 by:   Solipsist    PM
Score +77
"my head is shaking temendously because my moral compass is getting completely destroyed! <3" lol what. Of all the things you chose to translate, you went with this awkward thing? :v
Posted on 06 March 2017, 15:53 by:   Elinification    PM
Score +83
@Solipsist That's not a bad light novel title
Posted on 06 March 2017, 16:19 by:   dickliker420    PM
Score +177
On the one hand you get a devoted sex slave,on the other hand she looks really stupid.
Posted on 06 March 2017, 18:06 by:   danny quin    PM
Score +74
http://touch.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=57150985&ref=touch_manga_button_thumbnail

What about this one can this get translated? It seems to be a continuation of that comic
Posted on 06 March 2017, 18:42 by:   menoskiller    PM
Score +39
Does this mean he technicallly fucked his pet too?
Posted on 06 March 2017, 19:00 by:   AznTHundaGod    PM
Score +7
Mmm...new Hentai Theme. Moral Compass Smashing App / Magic.
Posted on 06 March 2017, 20:07 by:   MelancholyPrincesses    PM
Score +40
Man I fucking hate Asuna this is glorious
Posted on 06 March 2017, 21:33 by:   danny quin    PM
Score +54
I'd like to see the 2nd part translated cause it's lisbeths turn :)
Posted on 07 March 2017, 00:37 by:   fmlnolube    PM
Score +65
So... she turns into a clown?
Posted on 07 March 2017, 01:02 by:   danny quin    PM
Score +22
She becomes like asuna
Posted on 07 March 2017, 12:07 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +71
And nobody has uploaded the RAW yet? Leechers are sure lazy these days :)
Posted on 10 March 2017, 09:53 by:   theodiggers    PM
Score +26
@Ichini-ni Don't mind the haters, good work attempting a translation. They're awful at first, and only get better slowly. :D Then again, nothing beats being able to read fluidly in the original.

The moral compass translation is kind of hilarious though. Like meme level awesome.

ACTUALLY. I just looked at the original. Buddy, it doesn't have the words moral compass anywhere. You gotta be trolling! It was fucking lol though. Actual translation on that slide:

Ahahoh oho my heart ... being overwritten. bad ... by bad things like these
inside of my head is being corroded by lewd things .... I can't think anymore
ahahaaaaa cumming, being transformed
Last edited on 10 March 2017, 10:13.
Posted on 10 March 2017, 14:55 by:   danny quin    PM
Score +38
I still think it's good translation I' look forward to the lisbeth part :)
Posted on 19 June 2017, 07:34 by:   Prupriprupri    PM
Score +15
Hey man, i'm (like you) a new translator, and I really like asuna too, so please continue to do what you're doing, I know it's harder than you thought but there is always someone that appreciate your work (I send you a private mess. On the forum)
Posted on 18 April 2019, 14:07 by:   danny quin    PM
Score +6
I still hope to see the lizbeth part of this comic translated
Posted on 19 November 2019, 11:47 by:   vinowencel    PM
Score +8
Posted on 20 November 2019, 09:10 by:   Moonlight Rambler    PM
Score +17
first off, you're typesetting the text on the wrong sides. Right to left as in the source material, please.

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