Hi there! This would be my second English translation, as I said before, I’m nor a natural English speaker nor a Japanese one, so if you find a mistake let me know, any constructive criticism is welcome.

For the second part of https://e-hentai.org/g/1045582/80d7bc233e/ (http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ166572) I’m sorry, but I can’t even try to translate it until someone uploads the raws, all I can do until then is wait :/

Also I did redraw a couple of pages because I wasn’t totally fond of the original art, but since I don’t want to disrespect the original work and the reader might feel a little odd the sudden change, I just add them as extras at the end, I hope You don’t dislike them.

Finally I did add a warning page once again and for the same reasons, if you happen to like Alice.Blood’s work, then just ignore it. Enjoy!

Pretty good work on the redrawing. I totally understand why you did it, the artwork that you made is much better. The posture of the girl is much more natural, the black dude much more muscular. Thanks for sharing this with us!

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It's amazing to see more Alice.Blood translated. Great work, man.

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Commenting because the 2 last pages are awesome...
You should probably do your own stuff, I can see it work...

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What a rude story and lousy design.

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Does Alice drawn niples?

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