Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1024597/6c79294670/

Translated and edited by slimppy.

Here we go with another one from Dr.P!
There is only one more chapter from the scan above that remains untranslated.
As always I'm looking for ways to improve so leave a comment so I can improve!

Mmmm... Good effort. Hope the following suggestions help:

I'll use pg1-2 as an example

/ = starting a new line

Might want to level all the pages a tiny bit (they look decently clean to me in general so it won't need much leveling)

pg1 clean dirt on right side (eraser)

top right box
decrease font size. center text so that white space between top and text vs bottom and text is equal. basically the white space above/below the text should be equal. also try to avoid having text touch the left/right border lines
option1 (retains tone from original more): I bet/you're/wondering/...///how this/happened.
option2 (more localized): I bet/you're/wondering/how this/happened.

top left bubble
decrease font size a little
.../just/so/you/know/...
option1: .../just/so you/know...
option2: just/so you/know... (i find most translators bypass this pause since that is being portrayed at start of bubble)

top left box
decrease font size a little
center text so that white space between top and text vs bottom and text is equal. basically the white space above/below the text should be equal.
"happening" -> "unfolding"

midright bubble
slight font size decrease
no/touching/.../just look

no/touching allowed./looking/only.
many possible derivatives from this.
no touching allowed.
no touching allowed...
no touching.
no touching...

just looking.
looking only.
(blank)
my personal recommendation: no/touching/allowed.

middle double bubble
ok/...
i/under/stand

recommendation:
ok
i/got/it.

bottom left box
giving him a/private/mastur/bation/show...

recommendation: how i'm/giving him/a private/mastur/bation/show...

pg2 (crop left side to remove dirt. only need to crop a little.)
top right box: decrease font size. center text so that white space between top and text vs bottom and text is equal. basically the white space above/below the text should be equal.
money/.../i'm/compl/etely/dry.
option1: money./i'm/compl/etely/dry.
option2: money.../i'm broke.

next box: center text so that white space between top and text vs bottom and text is equal. basically the white space above/below the text should be equal.
i saw a/cool/manga/and i/couldnt/help/buying the/whole/series.
recommendation: i saw/a cool/manga/and i/couldn't/help but/buy the/whole/series.

next box: decrease font size. center text so that white space between top and text vs bottom and text is equal. basically the white space above/below the text should be equal.
i have/a bad/habit/of/impulse/buying.
recommendation: that's my/impulse/buying/at work/again.

top left box: decrease font size. center text so that white space between top and text vs bottom and text is equal. basically the white space above/below the text should be equal.
i don't/have a/job so i/suppose i/need to/find a/way to/get money.
recommendation: i don't/have a/job so i/suppose/i need/to find/a way/to get/money.

midright bubble: decrease font size a little. put "at least" on the same line. push font down a bit so the white space is more equal above/below the text.

next double bubble: decrease font size a little
heya/karasuma (this one seems fine)
i can tell/you're/having a/bad day/already/from your/look
recommendation: that look/on your face/tells me you/are having/a bad/day.

translate whatever is on his shirt. this appears to be some sort of exposition/dialogue

bottom right double bubble: decrease font size.
you're/not/wrong
the/hard/times/have yet/to come.

recommendation:
you/aren't/wrong.
but the/hard times/have yet/to come.

next bubble: put "day just" on same line and decrease font size

final bubble with the !?: decrease font size
i mean,/i've been/waiting here/for you for/a while/now...
put a TL note for what's written on her panties

cheers =)

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Slimppy I think it is a very good job overall and DR.P is in my top 5 best happy sex mangakas. But on page 2 what does it say on her panties?????? I feel like I am missing a great joke here. Thank You and carry on

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I'm really not sure the prostitution tag should apply here. I mean if you want to go technical about it, but she clearly liked the guy- it's not like she would do that with anyone else.

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I think there's actually 2 or 3 chapters from the tank that are still untranslated, tho if they are, they're not posted on this site.

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I think the cost to find out the answer to his confession would be covered by a diamond ring.

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Page 7:

"What''s going on here?"
"eep! Studying!"
" -_- ... Carry on then"

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If you give a mouse a cookie...he'll eventually want the nookie.

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No, @smartz118, I'm sure the mouse will want to feast on your blood and then raise the half-eaten dead as minion vampires.

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Hope the guy has some deep pockets, because dating a girl like that will leave him broke...
More Dr.P is always a great thing!

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Page 12, bottom left

My mind's telling me no
But my body
My body is telling me YEEES

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Thanks for the advice everyone.
I feel like I was a bit lazy with this translation.
I will probably revisit this one in the future, but for now I'm going to move onto the next translation.

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It's only smellz.

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@18: Ooo! Ooo! Ooo! I know! Make him pay you back by eating your pussy! ... Yeah right, as if that would ever happen. Queue predictable sequel where the next thing you know she's sucking dick.

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After seeing this girl pop up in Dr.P's stories for a while, super happy to finally see her star in her own story.

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Im glad he scored, but it seems like he got involved with an up and coming loan shark.

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Thanks for the translation Slimppy

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