[GrimFC] Plant Food [Ongoing] - E-Hentai Galleries

Posted on 22 April 2017, 18:50 by: Fire32

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Temporary Note: I moved 35-A/B/C to their proper spot with this update (they were initially posted at the end so folk wouldn't miss them).

I am Sonokeeper, writer for Grim Fate Comics! My ancient username actually matches that, but my display name is stuck as Fire32. :P Also, Bobbydando == Eldrik Aethervial, Bobbydando is just his HF account name.

Some of you might wonder what's going to happen to FvT, Eldrik's ongoing webcomic. It's still ongoing! Grim Fate Comics are obviously going to be much... darker than FvT (and done in his 2250x3000 high-res comission style instead of the 1500x2000, slightly cartoonish FvT style), so if you seek lighter fare but still hunger for Eldrik-quality work, check that out!

Are you interested in helping us upgrade the comic to fullcolor? Check out our Patreon at https://www.patreon.com/GrimFateComics to see the full-sized, HD pages, participate in the monthly bonus comic idea submission / voting, and more!

Note: Page numbers jump from 51->55 because we're adding 3 pages between 35 and 36 later this month. Our patrons voted to extend the Safi scene in place of a regular Grim Mini.

Posted on 17 July 2016, 15:09 by: brackstar

This looks great. I might consider to join. Will there be more instances of tight vore like this? I really like it!

Posted on 18 July 2016, 00:54 by: Fire32

@brakstar:

There will be more tight vore in this comic, although there will be other stuff as well. Issue #1, Plant Food, is going to run for over 120 pages. :D

I'll be making a gallery on g.e for the monthly mini comics as well once the second one is in. Both patreon-decided mini-comics were heavy oviposition, but there was a unanimous vote in favor of my "not three in a row" rule (some are even pushing for a stricter "not two in a row"), so next month's mini comic will not involve ovi. Someone suggested a tight vore concept, maybe it'll win the August vote (It fared pretty well in the July vote)?.

Posted on 12 February 2017, 20:58 by: Larkane

imercenary you obviously don't pay a lot of attention to QnA comic pages at all then, cause the QnA have a lot of the answers you are looking for. the pace of a long comic is meant to be slow and drawn out. Not all comics are going to be 30-40 pages and done.

Posted on 14 February 2017, 09:17 by: Fire32

Well.. although the Q&A comics*** do delve more into the background of some of these characters, I think Plant Food can stand on its own.

The main comic makes it clear that:
> Rika & Safi & Amber & Katarina were on the crashed airship.
> The airship crashed into some kind of horror jungle.
> Rika & Safi want to regroup with Amber and escape the jungle
>> Rika can sense location of something in Amber's bag.
> Katarina has something against the others that were on the airship. Murderously so.
> Juniper was not on the ship. She's been trying to find her lost aunt. Both she and her aunt are botanists.
> The monster plants want to vore/oviposition/etc these women.
> The women do not want to be eaten/stuffed with eggs/etc.
> Some mysterious entities are watching this from afar.

There is good deal more that can be inferred from the first 40+ pages, but the above is outright stated/shown and I think it is enough to follow the comic thus far. We don't the whole background, but we know the immediate desires of the characters and the gist of how everyone relates to everyone else. The only exceptions are Sylvia/Saundra - they've been inferred to also be from the ship but that's not quite explicitly stated (yet). Also, Larkane is right that this is a long comic.

***The Q&A comics are mostly safe for work. I've considered adding all of them to the end of this gallery (so it would be "All current main comic pages" followed by "All current Q&A pages") but I'm not sure if people would find having to find each week's continuation somewhere in the middle of the gallery annoying or not.

Posted on 20 February 2017, 02:27 by: Gogetters

@ imercenary

"You're obviously in love with your characters cause you named them,"

Yes, because the only time you would name your characters is when you're 'in love' with them, not because they're characters in a comic.

"Why would I read a Question and Answer for a webcomic? "

To learn more about the comic, the story, the characters, etc.

Posted on 26 February 2017, 18:04 by: imercenary

@ Fire32

No, its not your fault. Obviously its my fault for not finding the non-existent link to the "main comic", the name of which I still don't know so I can't even Google the damned thing.

My critique obviously should have been : This is a perfect story with perfect writing with perfect art. Do more of it.

Posted on 05 March 2017, 11:39 by: bobomb1

"You know I am gonna stop thinking for a while."
One of the most honest statements I ever read in this kind of media.

Posted on 16 April 2017, 12:30 by: Wynged

The extra Safi arc feels a little forced in the context of the scene, and I felt the previous fade to black was just ambiguous enough about elapsed time and how she broke.
But hey, I can certainly see why your subscribers voted for her. Her sarcastic tone and sassy internal monologue has easily made her the most attractive character in the story.
You know that's some serious sensation on page 35 when her stalwart stream of thoughts suddenly matches the moans outside.

58-59 now have brought us into "come for the porn, stay for the plot" territory that I can only surmise has to do with the inter-dimensional overlord who made a cameo earlier.
This plant(s?) was stated to have been given its power and presumably consciousness from that guy, but we viewers don't know what that's like yet. Is it a sentient colony a la Planet? An uplifted demon plant with an artificial mind? Maybe some dude from another reality that was gifted the form of rape plants from an ill-considered wish?
It definitely seems aware of being observed in what looks to be the flooded fantasy mirror of the other lab.
"The Diners" doesn't seem to be a real book and is probably just a vore reference, the books on the left just suggest arcana and craziness, the books on the right perhaps some insight into astral projection or possession of plants. The LCD monitor tells us this lab is at least at what we'd consider current day, but the ham radio and swirly-antenna'd TV again highlight eccentricity. Maybe they're the easiest to re-purpose. The power cables appear to actually plug into the magic circle.
Of course, most interesting of all is the blackboard. Memory record+soul bits and Theseus' Paradox suggest reconstituting a person. Whether that means from the plants, or as a means of travel to another world, or to resurrect the dead remains to be seen.
Maybe this unknown viewer wants to go there or steal someone away.

I am enthralled by this story. You could probably run a SFW web comic out of this world and be relatively competitive with anything out there.

Posted on 28 July 2017, 00:43 by: MGlBlaze

And she's dead.

At least she didn't really suffer exactly but it lives up to its 'grim fate' name.

Posted on 21 August 2017, 01:02 by: Valaska

This soft vore stuff is... Kind of nice. I wish the girls didn't get offed that's a bit far for me but at the same time its not as boner killing disgusting as most vore crap out there.

Posted on 04 March 2018, 01:28 by: Fire32

The current volume, which will conclude (one way or another) all of the current Woman-Plant interactions, is going to be another 100 pages or so. The comic will continue past that, however!

Posted on 17 November 2018, 17:00 by: Madmopper13

I wish there was a tag to indicate a series or narrative. Like fantasy series, or sci-fi, or whatenot.

Posted on 03 March 2019, 23:29 by: Fire32

Whose who (and what's happening to them as of page 154):

Safi is the fox gal, yes. She's trapped in a pod, but the liquid is pouring out.

Josie is the black-haired elf woman. She's Juniper's Aunt, and recently damaged the pod Safi is in. She's getting shocked in the most recent main comic page.

Juniper is the blond-haired elf woman WITH glasses, and she's currently headed to somewhere or other as part of a Plan(TM).

Saundra is the freckled lady that's trapped in the other pod.

Rika is the woman that's still alive underwater.

Sylvia is the blond-haired elf that had earth magic, and is currently bound in the coconut.

Neriah is the bird woman that's also bound in the coconut.

Mitra has never been shown on screen, but has been referred to as being a third woman bound in the coconut. What she looks like is unknown.

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UPDATE:

As noted before, next week I'll be removing the bonus vacation stuff.

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Posted on 13 July 2019, 09:21 by: Fire32

Hrm... on the sameness, I suppose it's because they various ladies involved ended up being in very similar set-ups. This scene ended up being longer than origionally planned, and I think it might have been better if we tweaked the coconut set up so that the three ladies were trapped a bit differently.

As for What's Going On.. well it's actually pretty similar to my last big comment.. anyway:

> Safi & Saundra are seeded and trapped in pods that are floating through the sky on a path leading them deeper into the jungle. Saundra has freckles and her reddish hair is more of a RL coloration. Saundra was with Sylvia back in the caves before they both got caught.

> Rika is in an underground lake, trapped in a Jellmock seaweed plant, and has hair that's a deeper red than any natural RL color.

> Juniper is trying to get the plants to release Josie back on the surface.

> Sylvia, last coconut survivor, is trying to slow down the process of the plant absorbing her for a quick boost of magic.

> Neriah, Katarina, Mitra, and Amber have been digested by various plants and are dead. Their souls, or at least what's left of them, have gone through some sort of salvaging process and will likely be used as materials for something else.

Posted on 10 January 2020, 04:47 by: Zotan

Anyone know if going back and coloring in the rest of the older pages is in the cards? It's not the end of the world, but the consistency would be a bonus on future readthroughs. Still, really like where the story is going so far. Looking forward to seeing if any of them are getting out of this alive.

Posted on 20 April 2020, 21:18 by: Fire32

Dragonaira has it - as long as Safi believes the plant can't kill her in the dream it really can't do it. Everything going on in the dream is either the seeds
A) Trying to come up with a plan, which it's indirectly having Safi do by having her subconscious fill in the memories "Amber" would have (Because the seeds are extremely limited mentally - Safi was correct that the entire dreamworld is borrowing from her own imagination).
B) Using the plan to trick Safi into thinking that the situation's changed, and that they CAN kill her after all.

Safi's soul is basically the nutrition the seeds need to fully develop their own consciousness.

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As for "the whole point"... I mean we had Juniper escape, and things are looking hopeful for Josie. The original Willow Palm not only lost a fight but was literally killed. The remnant w/Sylvia, even if it succeeds in converting her into a new core, won't restore the original plant's consciousness. It's dead, she'd at best be a more direct successor. Stoneslime Creeper has had a ~33% win rate (although it's still alive).
Edit: Stoneslime also failed to catch Josie. So 1/3.
Edit: Oh yeah, Jellmocks also failed to catch Josie (flashback). So they're only batting 2/3.

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Posted on 02 May 2020, 10:40 by: tredur

i really don't like all this fatal, but i can't stop reading and follow. i care for the people and hope they survive and each time they die.
i don't like it but well done, keep going .

Posted on 24 May 2020, 12:16 by: leddis4

It seems these comics have become even more boring, padded and tedious since Bobbydando had his nervous breakdown.

Posted on 25 May 2020, 17:19 by: leddis4

It actually had potential once. But Bobbydando tends to ruin any project he's involved with due to his mental illness leading to a chronic inability to take criticism.

Posted on 25 May 2020, 21:40 by: Fire32

What are you talking about, leddis4? I've been working with Bobbydando/Eldrik for years, and I have not had any issues with providing critique. I am easy to work with, granted, and Eldrik himself would note he is not thick-skinned when it comes to insults. There's a difference between "The ear is messed up", "The ear is messed up you hack", and "The ear is wrong, as I would expect from someone like you.". Eldrik can handle the first example just fine.

Posted on 30 May 2020, 04:33 by: afklgnrjkl

Just going to say this, I really enjoy Eldrik's work, and I think the quality has gone up, not down, over time. Keep em coming, and don't listen to the impatient ones.

Posted on 31 May 2020, 10:07 by: leddis4

No Fire32, he cannot. He explodes over even the most basic, objective criticism, spews insults and then gets more enraged when insults are then thrown back at him.
The man is severely disturbed and you are lying to defend him.

Posted on 20 September 2020, 01:43 by: auron7777

Get well Elrdik!

Posted on 10 October 2020, 06:12 by: Fire32

And we're back!

Posted on 09 November 2020, 04:56 by: Lord Janus

20+ pics later and she still hasnt died or been saved....

fire32: shes been ensnared for 32. THIRTY TWO pages.

even namek's 5 minute countdown didnt last 32 episoes.

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Posted on 14 November 2020, 19:04 by: dgerik

Time to wait another week to see if I have to wait another week to see if she gets saved ;-;

Posted on 28 November 2020, 14:26 by: dgerik

Yet another page where we have to wait a week to find out if we have to wait another week to know for sure if she's done for or not. I like that it's being updated constantly, but it just feels so unbelievably slow at this point.

Posted on 14 December 2020, 05:44 by: Oinato

Personally a bit disappointed that everyone seems doomed. Edit:About how many pages are left? And is there a chance of alternative ending bonuses?

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Posted on 15 December 2020, 04:27 by: Xion Rabbit

Same, hard to care about these characters and their struggles if you grow to expect them to die.

Posted on 19 December 2020, 07:41 by: Salminar

Hu so Rika dies too despite being told she would be spared if someone came to save her?
This one is a bit weird and sounded quite gratuitous, she melts in barely 2 seconds while Safi is right next to her and ready to save her.

Posted on 20 December 2020, 03:42 by: lordofmyth

and now all that backstory and talks have been rednered entirely poitnless as that lady literally does jack all to save her even though she's only like ten feet away.

yea this is actual garbage in terms fo storytelling. they wasted our fucking time with all of this when they could hve jsut had her die immediately and not waste time and their energy.

Posted on 20 December 2020, 22:59 by: Salminar

If it needed more than 2 seconds to melt her, how Safi couldn't reach her in the meantime? I mean here you have something really wrong, she can move pretty fast cause of magic but suddenly she sucks.
Once again so far i was fine with all that was happening, but this one really seems gratuitous. It's like this Star wars episode 8 with all the "gatya!" things that had for only goal to "surprise" even if it wasn't really making sense. They toy with her for hours and suddenly in a matter of a few seconds she is melted skin flesh bones all at once ... ok and Safi that is right next to her can't reach her in time and won't try to destroy the damn thing during the process. Is she blind too to not see the urge? Here i'm really feeling this was forced, i don't know the reason why you turned it this way, but it really feels forced to me.

Posted on 06 March 2021, 02:39 by: FarkyMac

@Fire 32 on February 27, 2021. Sounds like a huge fucking sack of excuses for why she's dying for no meaningful reason. She's dying because the script says she's supposed to die.

Posted on 13 March 2021, 19:45 by: Fire32

EDIT: The comment this comment is replying to doesn't appear to be visible anymore? At least not normally so.

When it comes to taking in feedback regarding what text was extraneous / could have been cut / etc..

Imagine a chef who hates muffins giving commentary on a batch of muffins. The chef can still have a great grasp of the culinary arts, and if they can keep their muffin-hatred separate from their critique they may even be able to give good advice. The way you immediately dismiss anyone with an interest in the plot as being empty-headed suggests no such separation has occurred though. I’m always interested in writing advice, and as I’ve noted before here and elsewhere that I feel Vol 1 had some issues, but your thoughts on how much description is too much sounds like it’s tainted by a lack of interest in descriptions in the first place. The point at which a page could have stood on its own without further text is obviously going to be a lot lower for someone that doesn’t particularly care about what’s going on.

For example, your summary of the Safi/Floria section is a fair enough gist. It leaves out a lot of the details, sure, but it would be enough of a scene setter to cover the basics of who is doing what. Anyone that was only onboard for the sexual content could make due with that. If we move beyond that to people that care about, for example, understanding exactly why Safi was able to overcome Floria the amount of text increases. If they care about understanding the back-and-forth between them, the amount of text increases. Stuff like knowing why Safi could use magic now when she couldn’t earlier, again, that increases the amount of text. Could there have been less text? Perhaps! I certainly agree that one shouldn't repeat in text what is clear in the art. A fair portion of readers were confused even with the current text level so I’m not sure it would be much less, however.

In short, although improvements can be made I think you’d need to be look at this more from the perspective of the people that ARE interested in the plot/character development/lore/etc and start suggesting text reductions/refinement from their perspective. Otherwise, rather than discussing how good the writing is your argument is more of an opinion that we should cater more heavily to a different sub-group of readers.

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You might be interested in the bonus art, tbh. It's mostly B&W but it keeps to sexual content happening, even in the short sequences. I mean there's also concept art but the vast majority of bonus art images are sexual content with no text at all.

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Posted on 08 August 2021, 13:22 by: leddis4

Good to see this comic still takes 3+ pages to depict something that could be portrayed in 1.

Posted on 17 August 2021, 15:51 by: cd_young

Gotta make that bank, commission/petron bucks won't flow if it's concise and efficient.

Posted on 06 October 2021, 16:37 by: Marius8

Chapter 2 page 11 surprisingly convincing :D

Posted on 26 February 2022, 05:13 by: Fire32

QUESTION FOR READERS: What would it take to get you to join the patreon for this comic (and its bonus art, etc)? We're open to suggestions, although Eldrik is swamped so ideas that involve him doing more art are infeasible. If we had enough $$ to seek out an art team to assist him that'd be another thing but that's a chicken-and-egg problem. Feel free to suggest things and/or like suggestions!

If you're already a patron, first off - Big thanks! Second off - are you pleased with your patronage? Also, if there's something you'd happily pledge more for please do share.

Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/GrimFateComics
Discord: https://discord.gg/Ctt6ynw
(Much of the discord is patron-only, but there is a public area).

Posted on 04 June 2022, 08:21 by: zandrei

I've read it and I feel like every page expects you to know something between the current page and the previous one. I cannot follow it and I don't have any idea what it's about. My best guess is its some people putting other people in a simulation and then repeatedly killing them for some reason in vaguely erotic forms. Repeat.

Posted on 20 September 2022, 08:55 by: Fire32

Welp, I spent over an hour writing a response that got eaten by EH. $@#! it, cliff notes version:

1) Eldrik has done male characters before, he's not the writer for this one.
2) No Male Victims: I, the writer, have less than zero interest in seeing men get sex'd up. I have more drive to write sexual stuff when I have at least a little interest in it. In what universe is not being attracted to men homophobic?
3) No Male Antagonists: Did one a long time ago, Pharaoh's Reward. Got a complaint from a female reader that liked to self-insert, regarding how they really like the way our series always had sensual/pleasurable doom without it being about some guy's gratification. GFC antagonists generally didn't/don't get any sexual gratification from what they're doing anyway, so why not cater to that niche? This also prompted me to focus a bit more on having all the dooms be intensely pleasurable for the victim, which has sort of become GFC's style so we're sticking with it. "Why not have male antagonists that simply do not jerk off to the lady's doom or whatever?" - eh, probably because A) I really like the "turnabout is fair play!" trope and like to leave the door open for an antagonist to become a future victim and B) Only ever having men as victorious antagonists would send a different sort of message, I think? Both of which brings us back to point (2).

... I guess the bonus art series "The Assessment" had male antagonists, but the goblins running that were female or at least a mixed group in the script it just got missed art-wise and wasn't worth changing IMO.

4) COLOR: We didn't have the funding to do so early on. We occasionally go back to color old pages, last time we did that was between vol 1 and 2. If we focused entirely on coloring it we could pull it off in... 5-7 months? Maybe 8? No one wants us to stop posting new stuff for that long.

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Posted on 29 October 2022, 19:01 by: sporgasbored

I've been following this comic since the very beginning. I used to love it.

Nowadays, it feels like I follow it out of obligations. I no longer have a clue what is happening. Or maybe it is just getting harder to care what is happening.

Am I alone in this?

Posted on 29 October 2022, 22:15 by: Fire32

I am curious regarding how many readers feel lost VS not lost (and caring vs not caring). If you feel lost and/or don't really care about what is happening, [Vote+] sporgasbored. If you feel like you know what's going on / care about what is happening, [Vote+] this comment.

Posted on 04 December 2022, 03:49 by: leddis4

I can only repeat that the main issue is this narrative *used* to be simple to follow. Adventurers in peril getting captured/raped/escaping/falling to their doom. Now it's metaphysical this and that with weird tests and motivations that aren't properly connected in scenes that take far, far too long.
This might not be a problem in a continuous story but in a once a week page format it absolutely is.

I'm not sure it's an issue with the writer either as Fairies vs. Tentacles has a similar problem with meandering to the point that people forget what's going on. Though it's concepts are a little less esoteric.

Posted on 08 January 2023, 19:55 by: witchking99

So, writer here! I do think narratively this story is absolutely suffering from an almost meta-story telling that is happening as I do see Sono(Fire32) post a lot on discord explaining things and divulging their ideas/details about stuff in the story. The problem is, this information isn't really being conveyed quickly, concisely or in some cases at all within the actual text. I will also say complexity is good but there seems to be a little too much as to what is going on within this universe. A lot of rules that don't seem to make much sense, in part because they aren't explained properly. But as a writer I know dedicating too much time to exposition will be terrible in a comic that is absolutely catering towards sexual interest not big brained ideas. So I think narrowing down what is going on into a much simpler form/smaller scale and just focusing more on interpersonal relationships/conflicts as well as individual motivations for the girls as they get eaten left and right would make for a much stronger story and product at this point. I've been following since Amber was first grabbed by the jemlocks and while there was a little bit of "meh" and "?" stuff in vol 1, vol 2 is filled to the brim with it.

As a reader, I don't really find myself caring about the diners, Horchestra, or the world building in general. It just isn't captivating or grabbing at my attention because it doesn't have the time or space to be fleshed out, nor is any attempt to flesh it out really appreciated because we're ultimately here to watch Safi/Rika/Amber etc all meet their grim fates via some vore/hot as hell death. Those are the characters we actually care about. As far as the overhead antagonists the only one I have moderate interest in is Horchestra's helper, and that's strictly out of the dark interest that she will meet her own grim fate in a form of psuedo justice. I think Sono wants a much deeper story with a rich world to play around in but this is ultimately a porn comic. So your story/world building has to be EXTRA strong to retain interest. I'll watch/read porn for the plot if its well done and engaging, but not if its convoluted and confusing. Once it feels confusing/convoluted I am basically just waiting for the next vore scene and skipping the rest.

I know Sono has mentioned in the past the readers will riot if there is too much time between the end of a porn scene and the start of the next one; I think with this issue you've softly acknowledged this isn't the place for a huge world building/grand plot narrative and just a place to have a bunch of girls die in creative sexy ways. You can either stick to your creative guns and do the project for yourself, accepting most of the audience is already lost at this point and just here for the porn material, or start making narrative adjustments to simplify the world/plot so that we can hone in more on the characters themselves. Right now I really don't care at all about the new character's we've introduced besides their capacity to find a horrible but creative way to die. And I'm only here to hold out for Rika/Safi's eventual permanent doom. I'm not here to find out what the hell Horchestra has been prattling on about because she sounds like she is undergoing real time psychosis every time she talks.

Edit: its possible Sono just needs some help ironing out/reworking dialogue and that could make things a lot more cohesive and fluid as far as story telling/world building exposition. I can tell Sono has a VERY cryptic style to writing/exposition which while is sometimes nice, gets old REALLY FAST when its your primary method of communicating ideas to the readers that seem to be vital for understanding the plot as it moves forward. Sometimes a concise simple explanation is just better, even if it feels boring.

Posted on 22 January 2023, 03:05 by: untitledfolder

I'm a lurker and probably in the minority here but now that I've been following the girls for so long I kinda want them to make it in the end. :(

Posted on 20 February 2023, 23:02 by: TetsuyaXC

I lost interest the moment the fox girl died, and even before the you could barely follow what was happening.

Posted on 25 March 2023, 07:04 by: Fire32

We'll also be posting part of the popular "The Wall" series. After that we will be resuming the main comic. I have more to say on that, but I will wait until we're closer to the posting to say more.

Posted on 29 August 2023, 05:14 by: Paradoxicalthird

This sounds like project death, bluntly. There's no way, and i mean this, no way on fucking earth you can retain the current amount of patrons you have moving to a text format with vastly less images. The market for novelizations of erotica is small as is, in this kind of content it's non-existent. I like the comic a lot, i was a patron for several years. There is no way to spin this as anything besides a major, probably catastrophic reduction in content. Plant food is the primary driver of patron revenue; you should be cutting literally every single thing except for it. Cutting it should be the last resort. Going from multiple pages a month to apparently one will just be a complete disaster and almost certainly financially unviable.

If the quality and quantity bars were set too high that's something you have to fix, but there's no way casual readers are going to keep supporting the project with a 75% reduction in main comic content and I'd wager nearly zero will be content with text only content.

Posted on 30 October 2023, 02:05 by: ArtifactChair

I've been enjoying the story and am curious to see where the plot leads. This honestly sounds like a good solution to me. I saw a lot of complaints about there being too many pages that were focused on exposition rather than providing lewd content, but a plot can't exist on sex scenes alone. The transition might have a bit of a bumpy start until an ideal balance between exposition and illustration is found, but I'm looking forward to future updates.

Posted on 31 October 2023, 09:35 by: Fire32

NOTICE: I've created a new minicomic gallery as the old one can't be updated (went to long without an update). So if you want to see the new minicomics, check out Grim Mini 2.

@Ms. Black Fire: The characters that die in Volume 1 specifically continue to exist in some form, although it's less than half of their original soul (with one exception that's over 70%). In vol 2, however, a lot of the ends are permanent.

The minicomics are more like Vol 1.

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@Lucariop: The B&W pages were in process when the sudden shift happened, and I didn't think they were worth waiting on color-wise as they were a needed but not particularly riveting transition scene. I'll probably replace them with text eventually, tbh, as a lot of what they skipped over (such as everything regarding Rika talking to the ladies that went into the sewers) could be more easily covered that way.

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@ArtifactChair: Indeed, this will likely be a great improvement to plot flow. A major issue that the screening segment handled poorly was the need to constantly have sexual content, but the random sexual asides weren't really satisfying anyone. The screening arc was probably 4-5x longer than it needed to be. Now we can skip the minor asides and power through stuff that doesn't lend itself well to perilous doom by making it just one part of a larger text update. This allows for stuff like characters talking to each other, action scenes, etc that had to be kept to a minimum to conserve panel space. Glad you're enjoying the story! :D

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Posted on 09 April 2024, 06:17 by: ThatOneNepeta

6 months since an update, Guess they abandoned this, shame I liked checking in once a year to see how things are going even after the part 2 writing seemed to be not up to par. Still wild only one page a week was put out for this considering their supporters give them a ton of revenue looking at the current patreon status, oh well I hope they have better luck on future projects.

Posted on 06 May 2024, 10:51 by: Fire32

And we're back! I mean, we never stop posting content to the patreon discord in the first place, but we're back publicly. I also need to post all the minicomics we've had since then. (BTW, new minocomic gallery is here: https://e-hentai.org/g/2910502/67ed60afb5/)

There will be additional updates this month as well, including 3-4 more images at a higher image-to-text ratio (Edit: Reduced amount, decided it'd be a good idea to keep a small buffer going forward).

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Posted on 07 May 2024, 03:45 by: AthenaVI

Welcome back! Love your comic and have been enjoying the new ministory, great writing! For maximum edging potential, hopefully you find that sweet spot where you keep Safi in extreme peril, and use the longer form text to add her distress and erotic reactions to facing unceremonious death for the delight of G-Layer denizens pegged to the max!

Seems like some new lore is built into the story to avoid too much deus ex machina, and actually let dark things happen to Safi. Looking forward to where things go, (hoping for the worst you can cook up, lol) and wish you best luck in the endeavor!

Posted on 18 May 2024, 03:54 by: Fire32

Good to be back, thanks! Glad you're enjoying the series~

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I've thought about the plan to post the additional updates, and am leaning towards maintaining a buffer instead of posting them this month. On the other hand, I did announce I'd be posting more updates this month. I suppose I'll post one of the two updates, keep a buffer of one update. Updates are posted to the patreon discord / archive as soon as they're done.

Going forward (aside from the extra update this month), there will be an update on the first Saturday every month.

Posted:	2017-04-22 18:50
Parent:	1051902
Visible:	No (Replaced)
Language:	English
File Size:	34.35 MiB
Length:	63 pages
Favorited:	5180 times

language:	english
artist:	bobbydando \| eldrik aethervial
female:	absorption anal asphyxiation bondage breast expansion cervix penetration corruption double penetration eggs electric shocks elf females only fox girl freckles gag impregnation inflation kemonomimi lactation milking nakadashi petrification plant girl rape slime snuff tentacles transformation underwater vore x-ray
other:	comic story arc

Rating:		1317
Average: 4.39