The style is very promising, looks great! THe story needs some further development at this point, and could do with some ... nudity! Thanks for sharing these first pages!

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Well, this is certainly going nowhere fast. His plots are just glacial.

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Awww.... this just makes me feel sorry for the lesbian... elf(?).... with the BBW fetish :-(

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They aren't elfs!!

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"Someone is wrong on the internet again!"

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"five gals".

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Really hopeful she's going to fuck that chubby doctor. But, unfortunately, Kip likes to tease sexy chicks on screen for a few panels and then let them drift off with no payoff. What are the odds it's 10 more pages before we actually see any porn?

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Ah yeah baby nothin' sexier than a blood infection get me that good good stuff

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Why did he stop working on Dinner with Sister JUST as he got to the good part?! This new series sucks!

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Because he's a twit, Taien - he's always been a twit. He actively blocks people from posting critical comments on this Deviantart page; he's either a pre-op transexual or cross-dresser, but actively tries to convince people he's a woman rather than being up front about it; in Lunch with Sister it became patently obvious that he was milking needless pages for donations... he's just a jerk. He's talented... his comics do (eventually) reward with payoffs... but that doesn't make him less of a scumbag.

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"How did a thread about videogame guys devolve into posting fat chicks??"
Never change /v/

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Calm down XD

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Why exactly does the gender of the author matter at all? How does that affect the work?

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Learn to fucking read, Florp46. I specifically stated that he's a talented artist. But that doesn't mean that he's not a catfishing cunt. FFS. You reactionary snowflakes are just pathetic. Run to your safe space before you blow a fuse.

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> You reactionary snowflakes are just pathetic. Run to your safe space before you blow a fuse.

Not a single hint of irony, eh?

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Calm down People just enjoy the Comic/Manga

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Why are people being an angry joe when you can just admire some ass and belly?

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... well, at least it's not vore this time.

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Kind of weird transition between 33 and 34

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That's because there's two pages missing between the two you mentioned, LobOss

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https://fallen hentai.wordpress.com/ has alot of awesome stuff :3

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This story has good detail, the WG is a little slow but the story is good so its a balance

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This is so slow in developing.

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Are you planning to post the missing the pages between 33 & 34?

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I like that it's "Misc" because nobody knows what the hell this comic even is at this point.
Certainly ain't porn, and with Kip's unholy reputation for dragging shit out I doubt it's going to have any of that any time soon

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Pages 46 & 47 of this gallery are supposed to be pages 33 & 34.

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