So which upvote bot are you using? Because I refuse to believe anyone read the sequence "But I must..." "Do you mind if I go eat something?" "First in raw!" "Ah... Ok!" would ever give this a vote of 5.

Looking at your uploads do you do French rewrites then re-rewrite them over to English?

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This is terrible.

Base +12, freespace2 +7, Taka at work +9, Anony12788 +9, Coffee Prosecutor +6, MattUzumaki +9, Imsolo +6, Kuro Yuuki +6, jessica702 +8, A Sad Dance +5, bety28 +6, rockingoldensamurai +6, Rvooo +6, and 1 more...

@Orion9137

From a comment in https://e-hentai.org/g/1057662/a36e602a7a/ , he says if it is a rewrite, he'll put RW on the title. Lacking so, this is his genuine attempt at translating (JAP => FR I assume, then FR => ENG), but he claims to be a beginner at this.

Base +12, Chamma +7, level27 +8, amurec80 +6

The poor grammar is because it was translated from Japanese to French, then French to English in a literal way, without taking care of grammar.

Base +7, Anony12788 +9, user777 +7, RLeader +6, amurec80 +6, rockingoldensamurai +6

not too bad!

Base +5, Taka at work -9, Imsolo -6, waltergeist -9, Kuro Yuuki -6, visin88 -6, Gahasa -18, Neighbours Club -6, amurec80 -6

Good stuff, thanks a lot :)

Please don't tag this with the "poor grammar" tag unless you're willing to take the time to document it properly...

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/poor_grammar

It's got at least one veto vote on it now, if you need it taken off just post in tagging and abuse after being sure there's the required checklist posted here in the gallery comments...

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=184081

Base +35, jessica702 -8, bergil -6, Halfey Halphstein -6

Examples of incorrect grammar, word usage, and/or sentence structure:
Page 1 - But I must... Do you mind if I go eat something?
Page 1 - First in raw!
Page 3 - I was advised about you... and not to listen to much to Mrs Rina
Page 4 - For once I've had found a pleasant partnership
Page 4 - When will you leave his poet's dick?
Page 4 - No I... I cum inside
Page 5 - Do you come home?
Page 6 - You're told to be skilled
Page 6 - And today starts your maternity leave
Page 6 - At the same time your having an affair with Mr Shirai

That's 10 easy mistakes in the first 6 pages, which is all that I can stand doing.

Base +6, Vivi1993 +15, Kuro Yuuki +6, bergil +6, mangarqst +11, amurec80 +6, Taka at work +9, rockingoldensamurai +6

Holy shit that woman is evil. Not only does she cheat on her husband, but she doesn't care either if the child is his or not.

Base +1, visin88 -6, amurec80 -6, Calicko -6, LazyGuy25 +6, himalllloi +6, Kamianme +4

@forgunia oh hey fresh mea-...i mean welcome, new guy, enjoy your stay at hotel NTR

Base +6, amurec80 +6, Calicko +6, Zorrlost -6

Aoi hitori makes good hentai as in art-wise but story-wise, it's meh. Or rather it's the same good ol' plot overused like hell, so in other words in tiring.

Base +7, visin88 -6, Ooe Kintarou +10

Wish there was a backstory, how did the dude get her in the first place?

Base +1, Ooe Kintarou +10, Calicko +6

@Forgunia
Ohoho a new guy. Welcome to the womderful world of NTR.

Base +5, Calicko +6, kinoshita_tokichiro +19, amurec80 +6

@tiger1296
the 3 previous chapters (same magazine , vol 23-24-25) translation is in progress.
I discovered them after i did 4th chapter, as DMM describe each chapter as single.
I'll publish and reedit the full four chapters.
stay tuned ;-)

Base +6, Calicko +6