Translation by Strange Grey Cat

Some people apparently have nothing better to do than retranslate things they know have already been done.

not bad. it was a good read.

Base +1, Slobber +29

I'm tagging this with incest. There is dialogue indicating that they have separate parents but then he refers to himself as her older brother (perhaps in a platonic way) and she constantly calls him onii-chan. It's a little stilted but better safe than sorry.

Base +25, White Joker +11, Shadow_771 -10, jaylou1010 +7, 海想列車 -12, Lakota -6, Slobber -29, Yattman -4, SapphireJack -5, msrat -7, Siquall -6, Pillowgirl -21, sgc_geh -11

funny story

Base +11