This is a comic that I made for Lovenekogirls22, via their suggestion on the Art Battle Thread. It was actually kind of fun to work on, and I'm definitely open to suggestions for doing more things like these.
I'm actually intrigued by the idea, but your execution is quite lacking. You should improve on your anatomy and blocking, it'll help you out significantly when making comics in the future.
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