First edition of my new series "Comic Chiyo". I will update 1 or 2 times per week.
More info and progress on Twitter: @Llun_comics
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Also I have a Patreon! If you support me you can have early access to new pages! Plus UNCENSORED content!
patreon.com/Llun_comics

Hey m8, maybe you should change the language from "Japanese" to "english" since the comic is in english.

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Where can I do that?

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The artsyle is nice, but I can't help but reading left to right lol

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It's western reading

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"Maybe I'm a little rude with you, but that's basically because you're a dummy" is the absolute champion backhanded apology.

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Not bad for a start. Pretty decent dialogue. Nice enough art, and being in full colour is a plus.

A little nitpick, the "You're not perfect, so as I" line sounds strange, I'd say "and neither am I".
Also, "If I fight doesn't mean you dislike me --" should probably be "If I fight, it doesn't mean I dislike you --"
There are some other clumsy wordings, but these two jumped at me.

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thx for the comments, I will fix it!

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Beautiful! Please do carry on with it.

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¡Dale Nicolas!

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What a cute and adorable comic.

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Is this dead?

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