As much as I hate to admit it, the conclusion ruined the impact of the story. I'm all up for happy endings, but you can't just end what's supposed to be a tragic story with that. You might as well write the entire thing as a comedy.

Ah, what the hell am I doing, complaining about the story in hentai.

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lol that was random

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Wait, so he kept fucking her after her heart stopped (she died) so he could get her knocked up. Necrophilia tag?

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"what's supposed to be a tragic story"

If the gags and the ending didn't tip you off, it's supposed to be a joke story.

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Why this Gallery was spunged? Is there another one?

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