Comic drawn by Bankokudou from Comiket 90 included in the doujinshi by Marunomare Pyua Nomi! Fes

Translation by me

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/d1bd100c2f/1017099-197

I'm not english native so please be merciful :P

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I understood it pretty well so it Seems pretty good to me. :)

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Is this Dragon Quest II?

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Why not ask an English speaker to revise the dialog? That would result in a better final product. Still, thank you for the translation.

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@ eastxx

Because if the first translation isn't good enough/is really bad, having an English speaker revise the dialog doesn't help.

That said, the translation isn't so bad it needs a second pass. Its obviously not perfect, but this isn't a hentai where the story matters.

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Huh, mindbreak is actually a surprisingly good way of dealing with an enemy that can ressurect. Props to the dragon girl. Thanks for the upload.

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( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Hey OP, You're missing one page. From page 9 to 10 the page numbers go from 205 to 207. You probably just didn't noticed you skipped a page during upload. Could you please add it? Thanks.

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sorry for the late response i'm uploading it asap

edit: uploaded right now

Last edited on 11 July 2017, 01:47.

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"Hero, please. Hide that erection. At least wait until you get there again to get horny. For heaven's sakes, we're still in the church."

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Last panel
Sfx erection
Lost my shit I laughed so hard

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hey chijinda96,

do U accept translation requests?
good job on translating this one, but this is already translated before and that wasn't so bad.
so we need U to translate many things else~

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No it was my old gallery, this is the same translation but with a page missing that i updated 2 days ago.
I think i can accept requests but i'm doing it as a hobby so i start to translate something when i'm free/ when i feel like it

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Damn, this is the best I've seen!
The author will still draw a similar?

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yes he definitely will, i'm not certain but he could make a short comic on the new pyua nomi of august next month sold at comiket

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Should not be tagged female:vore due to presence rule, 2/14 pages is not enough. male:vore with 3/14 is just barely enough.

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