Wow, someone posted my stuff? I'm kinda flattered and also embarrassed

Last edited on 12 May 2017, 01:18.

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It's great stuff though

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the text are really well done shame you didnt do all the girls

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@Samlans Its still a work in progress. There are two more so far that haven't been posted here yet and I'm still working on the other 5 girls. Also, I'm glad someone likes the text because everytime I post these I immediately think "Wow, I fucking suck at this"

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Holy shit this rocks!

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Find it hot, which I did not expect, but will mention that Jessie's background color makes the text a bit harder to read.

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@Triforce777 I this is good hope you do more and give the girls a bit more text.

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@Triforce777 it is really good, i cant wait for you to finish all the girls. you dont suck at it.
i can barley write normale english let alone such a good story

Last edited on 13 May 2017, 15:41.

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Needs more nudes :3

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It's a lot better than most of the really cringe worthy text people will add. The fact that you gave the player character a personality and managed to keep the girl's intact is what makes it so good. There's a degree of real humor when he takes a couple of days to figure out if Momo is actually under his power, or with the latest one where he got a new slave by complete accident (Phillip is gonna have a very fucked up childhood if she keeps calling her man friend "master" in front of the boy). It's fairly unique and on a grammatical level if flows very well.

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I actually picked up the game because of this gallery. It doesnt suck in the slightest (wait, this is hentai, is not sucking a good thing?)
Either way looking forward to the rest of them!

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@blakfayt I think his mother calling some guy master is the least of the fucked up things in his childhood, living with his dozens of step siblings and a couple half siblings, his stepfather has a harem, Auntie Tiffany projects an aura of 50s housewife, Aunt Nikki and Aunt Aiko are both mindless servants with a perpetual look of satisfaction on their faces, Aunt Audrey loves all the kids but if you piss her off she slips back into her mega-bitch persona for a while, Aunt Kyu is only around every now and then but his stepfather talks to her when she's not there (or at least when he doesn't think she's there), and everyone says he's too young to know why Aunt Beli and Aunt Jessie are always screaming and smell like squid.

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Who is this sexywolf69 troll and why are they negging every single comment?

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Text is a bit too small. makes it hard to read especially on 12.

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Aside from the text being a bit small and some spelling and grammatical errors, this was actually the first time I enjoyed MC content thoroughly. This is like an after-the-credits sort of thing to the game, how the protagonist went from loveless loser to having a harem and eventually even giving them better lives, which I sorta imagined anyway without the mind control part after the game. Even taking someones free will can be put in a positive light.

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Great stuff! Definitely looking forward to more from you!

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can you pls uploaded the lasted part the last picture is really hard to read

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Agreed, I couldnt read page 12. And its not from going blind.
...Well, I dont think it was anyway.

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For people asking for larger sized versions, unfortunately I'm not the uploader of the gallery so I can't replace them but here is the original source and you can see the larger and more legible versions there

http://hypnohub.net/pool/show/1750

Hopefully tedturner07 will fix this soon, though

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What's a hunie?

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@abacion it's a reference to the titular game that misspells honey and money as hunie and munie

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"I'm just asking you, from the bottom of my heart, I love you Audr-!"

-"Yeah, yeah, yeah, whatever... okay fine, let's go to your house, I'll drive."

[This is a message from Kyu (your pink little helper fairy): I want you to FUCK THE SHIT OUTTA HER!]

"Okay, mister man, I got my "GIRL DICK" on, I'm gonna stick it inside your rum-ham asshole. Are you ready?"

-"Haaaa! Yes! I'm ready!"

-"Okay, well here we go..."

MAGIC MISSILE!

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@Triforce777 I come from the future, this gallery is very pleasing and I was eager to see more but it seems you have deleted everything from your DeviantArt profile. is there any other way someone can access your stories in the big 2025?

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