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Posted:2017-07-22 09:27
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Language:Japanese  
File Size:24.68 MB
Length:18 pages
Favorited:178 times
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Average: 3.53

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Posted on 22 July 2017, 09:27 UTC by:   Avaden    PM
Uploader Comment
No text version.
Anyone who wants to add text can add freely (just show me after :P)
Posted on 22 July 2017, 11:31 UTC by:   Dracounius    PM
Score +7
Who is the artist? Don't recognise this one.
Posted on 22 July 2017, 11:49 UTC by:   Cily    PM
Score +11
I think Avaden made this himself
Posted on 22 July 2017, 13:46 UTC by:   Avaden    PM
Score +9
Yes its mine :)
I'm still learning lots of stuff. But I though best thing to do is getting some critics now.
Posted on 22 July 2017, 14:00 UTC by:   spywall03    PM
Score +15
Well if it's critics you want,here's mine :

I love it. The only small downside is the fact that the transforming character has their body obscured on page 10 and 11

keep up the good work.
Posted on 22 July 2017, 14:17 UTC by:   KamikazeShooter    PM
Score +6
Well now, that was alright, hope there is more work from the artist!!!

At least they stay together and have a happy end!

Thanks @Avaden for this!!!
Posted on 22 July 2017, 14:55 UTC by:   just_for_fappin    PM
Score +6
It's definitely a good first effort! Try to ignore the low star rating. I think with some more practice on storyboarding you'll make some great stuff! Also don't be afraid to take your time with transformations. I think this series https://e-hentai.org/g/1054089/f9bb18d90c/ has a good balance between spending too long on each transformation and not enough time.
Posted on 22 July 2017, 18:58 UTC by:   ArkD    PM
Score +7
this is outstanding Avaden! looking forward to seeing more from you! the transformation seemed too fast though!
Posted on 23 July 2017, 02:20 UTC by:   melekain    PM
Score +7
pretty dope
Slightly odd that the grown futa dick looks like it is not part of her body.
Posted on 23 July 2017, 03:42 UTC by:   JT Jag    PM
Score +7
Good effort. I feel like there could have been a few more transitional frames--- the transformation jumps abruptly between a couple frames, and the clothing completely swaps from one frame to another at one point. And you can improve the posing to better feature both characters. But it's a nice gradual transformation, and there aren't enough of those. I'll be paying attention to your future works.
Posted on 23 July 2017, 12:48 UTC by:   AzureRafflesia    PM
Score +4
Not sure if the title is a joke on the fact that the guy wanted to bang the girl but it *worked out* the other way round or that having sex was their *different way* to *workout*
Posted on 23 July 2017, 19:25 UTC by:   Avaden    PM
Score +6
Thanks for the feedback from everyone :)
The reason I wanted to learn all these stuff is that I just can't find enough of what I like, so I decided to make them instead.
@just_for_fappin I know his work very well.

Thanks again! And I will surely make more for y'all.
Posted on 24 July 2017, 05:43 UTC by:   Senkoau    PM
Score +6
Just a few little comments. I agree that we could do with a few more transitional frames especially since I like slower transformations and you do a nice drawing style at least as far as my tastes go. One criticism I would make though is that you have a black man at the start in the gym but a white one on the cover I assume that's meant to be the same guy/girl so I'd make those match up and have him black on the cover. Especially as its even more of a contrast tall black man to shorter, pregnant white woman.
Posted on 30 July 2017, 05:07 UTC by:   Tress-Manipulator    PM
Score +4
Absolutely loved this series, we need more stuff like this! Could you make the actual transformation a bit lower perhaps?

Also, this is just a request, but could you render some really long hair in your next piece please?

Thanks :)
Posted on 05 August 2017, 14:59 UTC by:   Avaden    PM
Score +6
My deviantart page is done
https://avi0627.deviantart.com/

I will consider all of your comments for my work, that I will post here.
Also, I'm trying to work on some game featuring my work in HTML.
However please be patient with me, as I'm preparing for college and it takes time.

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