Shattered Pleasures (ongoing) - E-Hentai Galleries

Posted on 23 July 2017, 18:36 by: lutai

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Hello everyone I would like to announce that I have a kickstarter for my another project im working on called shattered pleasures, me and Pottedplant another DA and artist is working with me on this series.

The First two pages were made by artist ArtByZora.

The story: Xing Zhi a banished deity from the celestial world was imprisoned for 1000 yrs on earth within the yellow river for his misdeeds against his own kind and humanity itself for bringing demonic lust bound creatures into the world. Now after a construction accident he has been freed from his prison and the whole world is his playground again but a group called Extermas is a anti monster unit that tracts down magical or monster like horrors in the world and tries to stop them from trying to control the world or destroy it. Will they be able to stop Xing Zhi and his demonic horde from causing chaos!?

This comic is a Action/Horror comic that will involve vore,sex, and violence. More volumes are to be expected but only if the patreon

https://www.patreon.com/Luzhen

Right now pages 3 and 4 are being reworked and will be published soon, afterwards pages 5-12 will also be published

Posted on 23 July 2017, 20:50 by: Nakromis

I'm confused how that can be worth 1200$, on Kick starter of all PLACES! and how this is uhm. i don't understand this.

Last edited on 31 August 2017, 11:16.

Posted on 23 July 2017, 20:58 by: Narutu sand ninja

Jesus Christ this is horrifying.

>This comic is a Action/Horror comic

Ahahaha, yeah sure buddy. Come on, you're not fooling anyone. This is a porn comic with some horror themes. This shit is gonna get removed from kickstarter I'm pretty fucking sure.

EDIT: Well I guess patreon is better than kickstarter, but dude? You aren't even close to good enough to deserve to be paid for your fetish art. No one should have to pay for sub-mediocre drawings of mutant MLP characters assimilating furry chicks. And holy shit, you want 100 bucks a month to make this? God damn son, that's some audacious shit right there. Maybe 20 bucks a month. And fuck, you say 100 bucks to just make the FIRST CHAPTER? What do you think you're gonna do, sell this shit at Comiket?

Also, don't fucking shill your stuff on here. I'm gonna assume you didn't realize since you seem to most likely be a teenager, but no one wants to that shit here, don't do it. Oh, and make sure you don't put your real name and city on your weird fucked up fetish porn projects, James Bean of Paris, Kentucky.

Last edited on 24 July 2017, 20:43.

Posted on 23 July 2017, 21:06 by: hermit20

The third image is sort of small there man. Do you have a bigger version?

Posted on 23 July 2017, 21:09 by: Demiroth

Just make a damn patreon already don't kickstart this stuff man.

Posted on 23 July 2017, 21:27 by: negavamas

$1200 for this, are you fucking mad?!

Posted on 23 July 2017, 21:59 by: theboredotaku

I have NO issues with the fetish.
I have NO issues with the idea of paying for comics.
I have NO issues with KickStarter.

but the fact that you went to KICKSTARTER means you don't understand how reality works. you have 50$ pledged of 1200$ and have 19 days left to get the money.
5 backers pledged 10 bucks so far, your NOT gonna get the money, you know this right? kickstarter isn't the place to go to fund comics, patreon is.

I genuinely feel bad for you, but why not just use PATREON? you get paid monthly and can just produce your comics for everyone to enjoy :) I'ts a win win for everyone involved. the creator the customers and the public.

PS. I'm not trying to hate or be an ass, it just frustrates me because i liked and fapped to this little bit.
I want this to succeed and be a full comic but knowing it wont and it's because you didn't market it right is what pisses me off.

Posted on 23 July 2017, 23:04 by: lutai

Should i try to use patreon?

HERES THE PATREON LINK SORRY FOR THE BS WITH KICKSTARTER

https://www.patreon.com/Luzhen

I hope you will support it :D

Last edited on 23 July 2017, 23:27.

Posted on 23 July 2017, 23:58 by: l4chuga

So we have The Thing taking the form of Princess Celestia and is running around absorbing Furries? K, got it.

Posted on 24 July 2017, 04:47 by: theboredotaku

oh my god. you actually took our advice and apologized? i feel bad now for being so critical >.<
that's really mature and cool of you.

Posted on 24 July 2017, 14:54 by: Crociere

IDUNNOIFICANFAPTOTHISBUTISTILLFAPPED

Posted on 25 July 2017, 00:10 by: lutai

Ok the reason I choose 100 was just an shot I can lower it if it would seem plausible but I have an artist to pay and each page which I usually have 2 or 3 mad a month would cause near that much. Though I appreciate the advice and let's be respectful and yes and rl names don't matter here cause it's the person. I'm not telling people forcefully to fund porn I'm just asking for help to tell my story, and I have allot more to tell.

Posted on 25 July 2017, 09:18 by: negavamas

The problem is not the money you ask, the problem is that you think you are going to get money for this, much more talented, experienced and famous artists barely pass the $100 barrier what makes you think you and your buddy will even reach half of that?

Well that and that shilling in this place is not very welcomed, this is the worst possible place to ask for money or criticism.

Posted on 25 July 2017, 17:26 by: lutai

Well another comic did the same and it's the most hated/loved comic on the gallery

I'll just keep posting anyways. So I'll take advice and the hate and do what others have before, so please and thank you and sorry if this offends, i just want to branch a form of fetish porn that will make ppl excited.

Posted on 26 July 2017, 01:35 by: danund81

One criticism I'd offer is first impressions are key. The title pic, the thumbnail alone is enough to get you downvoted to all hell on this site. No one will even give your drawings a chance if the first image isn't the most interesting thing ever. That's advice that applies to a lot of things actually...

Posted on 29 July 2017, 10:24 by: gigadyne

For $1200 I'd spend that on some art courses and come back and draw a 24 page comic that'd definitely come out better than this mess

Posted on 02 August 2017, 07:06 by: Quakenshake

Sometimes I stop fapping because of story.
Sometimes I stop fapping because wtf fetishes.
Sometimes I stop fapping because I'm laughing too hard.
And finally, I sometimes stop fapping to goggle at the retardation of some people.

Posted on 15 August 2017, 20:05 by: Ixiah

If we pay double, will you not draw this Comic ?
Or at least use the Money and visit an Shrink, you´ve got Problems.

Posted on 15 August 2017, 22:34 by: imercenary

A patreon for a gallery with just 5 pages? Disgusting.

Posted on 16 August 2017, 00:38 by: lutai

You can pay 1 dollar for the rest of the pages idc if isn't allot anything counts

Posted on 16 August 2017, 05:47 by: bakalicious

dont eat me bro

Posted on 16 August 2017, 05:53 by: Loki The Flameshield

This is one of the scariest things on the site.

Posted on 16 August 2017, 09:36 by: gekoku

http://i.imgur.com/HVyVZtx.png image #4 be like

Posted on 16 August 2017, 11:30 by: mombastical

You need jesus, bro.

Posted on 16 August 2017, 19:01 by: gweh

You know that feeling you get when you kinda vaguely feel like you're being watched or just that something's super off and you get a full-body shudder through all your muscles?

That just happened to me because of your creepy-ass cover. So thanks for making that a thing whenever I search the tags on this.

Posted on 16 August 2017, 21:01 by: lutai

That's what I live for :D and what I'm driving with this comic series, keep going down the rabbit hole and we will see how deep this shit is :D Also expect game of thrones death mixed with blood c level deaths but with slime and infection so allllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooot of death and the epic WHY BONER to the point your cock falls off and well whatever icky thing girls have when well that's a dark subject :p Anywho enjoy it hate it. AS THE CRYPTKEEPER SAYS "THANK YOU AHAAHAHAHAA!" From demon knight trailer.

Posted on 24 August 2017, 03:42 by: Runeless

Ah here come the NIGHTMARES

Posted on 25 August 2017, 02:53 by: Meganekko-sama

If you don't like it, don't buy it. But jesus is 1200 waaaay too much. This artist is greedy and as such is gonna fail. No worries.

Posted on 25 August 2017, 02:57 by: lutai

na i was wrong before but now its just a one dollar thing or higher I have embraced my fault and it seems some peeps have forgiven me

but i will post one page here every two weeks just to keep the people who like it engaged

Posted on 25 August 2017, 03:47 by: Zeikfried

Why don't you take the Scott Cawthon route and just go full horror.

Posted on 25 August 2017, 05:16 by: Kuntitled

This is disgusting

Posted on 25 August 2017, 07:20 by: ControlAlty

Pic #3 : What is this, a picture for ants?

Posted on 25 August 2017, 12:37 by: lutai

well because i want to give the full why boner thats why

thought I give one more because i love u all so much :D

Last edited on 27 August 2017, 23:20.

Posted on 27 August 2017, 23:43 by: jaymin66666

Wow This is fuck up .

Posted on 28 August 2017, 00:51 by: kieyzo

Allow me to add my 10 cents,the dude knows his drawings are the stuff of nightmares,god only knows how many ppl youve given nightmares too. But you've got guts to post this stuff here. I hope someone gets a kick out of your art,ill only drop in to see what other horrors are created, its honestly like watching tales from the crypt lol

Posted on 28 August 2017, 10:14 by: Idealizer

Pre-puke saliva fetish, is that a thing now?

Posted on 01 September 2017, 04:05 by: 37311095

I am here for comments.

Posted on 11 September 2017, 13:29 by: FireBallGT

I'd rather read a Laruffi translation than this Horse-Shit!

Posted on 12 September 2017, 20:20 by: Titsplox

https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/le-miiverse-resource/images/8/8d/Disgusted_yoshi.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20151115234639

Posted on 13 September 2017, 17:20 by: okamiKung

totally shit

Posted on 23 September 2017, 16:21 by: edibility

How do we vote to delete this shit? Mostly the advertising but also because its pure trash

Posted on 23 September 2017, 17:06 by: xblurp

I think page 3/Shattered pleasure 1 needs a re-upload to a bigger size. It's pretty tiny.

Edit: If you have the original file, trying changing the resolution and then export it.

And if it's because of the site then cut and paste the panels and put the images going down vertically instead of horizontal.

Last edited on 25 September 2017, 00:46.

Posted on 24 September 2017, 20:16 by: Enbu

This is supposed to be porn I think. I think.

Posted on 24 September 2017, 22:34 by: lutai

page 1 is stuck like this ive tried everything

Posted on 25 September 2017, 12:17 by: Calarakien

Someone wants money for this? i feel like i should be paid just to read this

Posted on 26 September 2017, 06:04 by: Cryosite

It isn't even the fact that this is "horror" that it deserves to just be abandoned. It is that it is shoddily drawn regardless of what it is trying to be.

Go to school, practice, learn how to draw, then start looking for money once you have something to actually sell. Come back when you have the talent to actually draw whatever the hell it is you're going for here. It isn't gross or scary. It's just pathetic.

Posted on 26 September 2017, 06:05 by: Havel The Rock

This is why we can't have nice things

Posted on 26 September 2017, 08:23 by: Cameron Hagen

You want 1200$ for this smut?

Amano Taiki could maybe coax me outta 100$

For you I wouldn't throw a fucking dime.

Posted on 27 September 2017, 11:13 by: lutai

if u bothered to read other comments i have a patreon now for much less :D Also I know most of you don't like it but you forget im not the only who asked for a patreon like this, and its your choice to read or not read. BTW trying to shame someone on a porn sight is just as if you went to a fetish convention and was the only normal person there, I have people who like it and people who don't. I have acknowledged my mistake with kickstarter and went to patreon and in all honesty im making good with patrons and keeping promises. Thanks for your critiques and have a nice day :D

Posted on 28 September 2017, 00:00 by: gftrym

#4 is unbirthing?

Posted on 02 October 2017, 20:58 by: edernis

do you have patrion?

Posted on 05 October 2017, 23:53 by: lutai

yes i do have one link is above

Posted on 06 October 2017, 06:45 by: 420memescoper

I actually GET the fetish and i still find this abhorrent.

This site could use a little more filtration

Posted on 06 October 2017, 19:59 by: Enbu

When you can't even get a depraved pigman like me a stiffy; that probably means this is not your calling. All this proves is this site needs an album ignore feature so when a user doesn't like a work they can just never have to see it again when searching for things to jerk it to.

Posted on 07 October 2017, 08:56 by: Boy Named Sue

The fact that this gallery has a half-star and that your Patreon only has $49 pledged as of the writing of this post should tell you that this is not the website to undertake this endeavour on.

Please stop advertising your Patreon on this site.

Posted on 17 October 2017, 03:05 by: SaradominSpy

No! I don't want that!

Posted on 05 November 2017, 22:34 by: Matwau

there goes my dinner...

Posted on 17 December 2017, 19:19 by: lutai

and we are back sorry for the wait had to fix a few pages but we got more for ya :D

Posted on 17 December 2017, 22:21 by: sexytree

fuck this you fucking asshole, you dont deserve a motherfucking dime fuck you. i'll not incite any violence but the world would be better if someone were to put a bullet in your head

Posted on 18 December 2017, 02:26 by: lutai

welp...got nothing better to do soooo https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ydTr22FOrE im dead now so wounds don't matter :D

Posted on 18 December 2017, 06:46 by: Dr H. Fapalot

Let me start by saying this ain't quite my cup of tea but if there's one positive thing about it is that it's original. How many times have I read comics that were copies of other comics? I don't know how you managed to reach your Patreon goal(s) ( over 150 bucks/month at the moment is quite an achievement, I believe ) but congratulations on that. I admire your guts and perseverance because I'm sure it's not easy to gather fans when you make very specific art like this that doesn't appeal to the masses. People will try to bring you down and call you all sorts of things. We have some examples right here. As for the art itself I don't personally like it but there's something original as I've said. I don't see the porn in this to be honest ( so yes I question its presence here ) but there's a meme-ish feel to it. I'd recommend spending more time on each drawings. Adding colors would definitely be a plus. An actual story would be nice.

Posted on 19 December 2017, 08:45 by: eric 1

WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU BRUTALLY MURDER THE WILLING CHARACTER WVERYONE UNPRINTS ON??? My boner HAS NEVER BEEN SO HARSHLY RUINED

Posted on 20 December 2017, 12:33 by: Jomamma64

Getting real tired of this popping up every time it updates.

Posted on 25 December 2017, 18:28 by: HQK

We should pay respect to all kinds of taste...but I cant even tellkind of fetish is this?

Posted on 26 December 2017, 00:48 by: RatherUncreativeName

It seemed like it almost fit a sort of assimilation fetish, which I can get down with, but as soon as it gets to the good part where someone actively offers to join them, it becomes a nightmare fuel vore thing. For me personally, the transformation aspect loses its appeal when the receiver of the transformation becomes a mummified husk, but I'm sure that's just someone else's fetish.

Posted on 27 December 2017, 01:00 by: edibility

Welp time to filter this pure trash, always pops up in my fucking searches

Posted on 28 December 2017, 22:52 by: DallyD

This comic is rad.

I think that panel 16 is the strongest one in the series. Its such a fucking crazy tonal shift, and the fourth panel on page 16 is incredible.

You made a bit of a misstep in asking for so much money for it... But that's all it is, a financial mistake. The comic itself is amazingly original, and super creative. I think that you have some balls for making something so out there, and I really admire that.

You got a lot of negative feedback, but please don't let that discourage you from continuing to create.

The very fact that you inspired such a visceral reaction from so many people shows that you have something really special here.

Even if you don't finish this comic, please continue to create!

Believe in yourself!

I do. :)

Posted on 04 January 2018, 07:03 by: SagaTheDragon

You know, maybe you can see this as a chance to reinvent yourself. Relearn the basics, really focus on you studies, try new styles and try different things. Sure this didn't work, at all, but maybe you can refind yourself another way.
Plus not to mention there isn't shame in finding a new calling. Not everyone is an artist, maybe there's something you'd be better at.

Posted on 07 January 2018, 16:46 by: Ande_85

This reminds me of one of those 70s drug cartoons that was popular back then. Not saying it's a bad thing, just that is my first impression when looking through this. As for charging for continued work on it...I don't know...I think not charging anything, and having it strictly donation based in a better idea, and a way to attract a lot less hate. The point is, for this comic, given the negative publicity it has received, I think only continuing as a passion project would be the best way to turn things away. Just be "hey, here's something I'm working on, and if you like it, float me a few dollars, and if not, then at least toss me some feedback."

I like this comic, but only for the novelty of bringing me something I really haven't seen that many times before, so if my words sound like I'm condemning you with faint praise, apologies in advance. Keep working on this, but only because you want to, otherwise the resentment may show through your work.

Posted on 29 January 2018, 01:32 by: guylikesex

We have strayed so far

Posted on 04 February 2018, 02:10 by: xxhieixx

Please stop posting.

Posted on 04 February 2018, 04:09 by: Lord Dashwood

So I finally clicked into this gallery to see what that cover pic of Princess Celestia either drooling on or chewing on a woman's hair was all about.

I see that the answer was not worth putting this into my browser history.

The best I can say is that at least you have a work ethic, but I'm with the rest of the commentators: this isn't worth money.

Posted on 04 February 2018, 04:46 by: AnonimousFan

Would you take my money to create a website with all your backers so this won't have to show up on e-hentai like transmorpher annoyance marketing?

Posted on 09 February 2018, 23:31 by: llorir

I'm really glad there's about three garbage galleries that keep on getting updated that pop up whenever I search any tag.

Posted on 27 February 2018, 08:06 by: hibryd7

WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON?

Posted on 27 February 2018, 09:50 by: AlientKnight

You know, for better or worse, I am curious just what sort of spectacles will just ooze out from the artist's mind next. It's almost like I am watching someone going through a bad acid trip, and have it visualized in MLP art.

Posted on 28 February 2018, 23:34 by: darktails

i want cry

Posted on 12 March 2018, 05:53 by: Doommaster

Men this is like a rolling snowball but made out of shit it just keep getting bigger and bigger in a horrible spectacle no one wants to see.

Posted on 14 April 2018, 22:25 by: JovanJocaCar

Doommaster, don't say that. You know people would pay top dollar to see a giant shit ball rolling down a hill like some sort of Scatamari.
Shit, I'd make a game show out of it.

Posted on 16 April 2018, 22:20 by: Perfesser Bear

Over 650 ratings, and it can't break 2/3 of a star. That should be telling you something, like, it's putrid.

Posted on 18 April 2018, 03:24 by: smullville

I'm wondering why my comment was deleted... was it because I gave any sort of defense for this?

(Ahem) per my original comment: there is WORSE shit on e-hentai than this.

Posted on 20 April 2018, 13:00 by: ilikessbbwandslobs

this scares me

Posted on 23 April 2018, 18:07 by: Pononimous

How horrible that a sick, fucked-up individual would be demanding money for this. Such sick shit isn't worth even the smallest amount of money and, in a better world, the author would be broke, sick and homeless.

Posted on 29 April 2018, 18:21 by: CrasherRed

uh alright but like, why is it the horse princess

Posted on 03 June 2018, 22:12 by: lutai

Hello everyone its me Lu Zhen the writer/creator (not the artist) of this comic. Now I know the love and hate this comic generates and well its good and bad I love the support and love the negative comments because its just telling me to get better and work harder. Yes money was the main problem for this comic's popularity may of even tanked it but well it takes money for anything you do and I did have good support for a while and even tried to get more artists on board but some wished to other things or were unreliable. The main artist is the man who draws the comic, and still work on it for me. So despite financial and time issues the comic will continue for all to see and ill try to make updates when I can. So for those who love it thank you for those who hate it thank you.

Posted on 05 June 2018, 05:08 by: ZxWasHere

i wouldn't say "love".
but i like this comic

Posted on 05 June 2018, 14:11 by: DallyD

The thing I like about this comic is how creative it is. I stopped wanting to fap after about the 10th page, but I still keep coming back to see what creative way the next person is gonna transform. You're a good writer and have some cool ideas. :)

Posted on 03 July 2018, 14:34 by: Pononimous

Why the fuck did you even bother making this thing? What a huge waste of time: yours and everyone else's!

Posted on 18 March 2019, 20:03 by: Furryboi04

What The Fuck did I just read?

Posted on 15 March 2020, 05:42 by: Doommaster

I can't be the only one who willingly return here purely to read the reactions on the people on the new comments.

Posted:	2017-07-23 18:36
Parent:	None
Visible:	No (Replaced)
Language:	English
File Size:	2.20 MiB
Length:	4 pages
Favorited:	219 times

language:	english
parody:	my little pony friendship is magic
female:	absorption big ass big breasts big lips breast expansion catgirl furry futanari guro inflation milf monster girl penis enlargement slime transformation vore weight gain

Rating:		735
Average: 0.65