Original art work by - https://devilhs-adult-art.tumblr.com

Do something about the order of the images. The three new images would only confuse readers because of how they're ordered.

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Should I remove the old ones then?

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This is rather excellent, shame he stopped but you're doing good work!

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The sketches look better honestly.

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@Sir Garland - hmm, I only felt like cleaning it up but thanks I guess.

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Since they've stopped working on it... shouldn't the gallery name be (as complete as it gets) or something instead of (ongoing)?

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the only reason I didn't give 5 stars is the lack of completion to the work. But I believe 4.5 stars more than adequately expresses my satisfaction. (D! Color in those panels!!)

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p15-17 are edits done by lollipopmelons
This gallery basically takes the edited gallery here https://e-hentai.org/g/1092515/bc5dea1ac5/
and adds to it the original concept art by devilhs (p18-34 in this gallery)

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