Working on the colored version.

It would be better if you just worked on the colorization and not the rewrite. I've been on E-hentai for 8 years and I'll tell you now that rewrites are never welcome no matter what you write.

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I never understood the point of rewrites.

If you can't translate Japanese then don't make your own version. If you didn't like the original text why would you remake the authors work into your own? That's just disrespectful to the original author.

I don't get it.

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also why translate the samples just wait until the whole doujin comes out that really could potentially piss people off that don't know that's what you are doing.

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@Orion9137: You can apply that logic to all parody doujinshi. I mean, how is drawing naruto porn less respectful to the naruto author than a rewrite is to the doujinshi author?

I'm not fond of rewrites either, but I get where they're coming from.

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I'll be interested in seeing you rewrite all 39 pages @DeePoon.

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@Jim_xxx
I did for th last one and people didn't seem to mind. I'll rewrite the full doujin when it's out. I used my phone for this one so it's a bit crappy.

@LustLord
My previous rewrite was well received, I like rewrites because it's different dialogue all together. Anyone not interested in rewrites can just wait for doujin-moe to translate the full thing.

*shrugs*

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*rewrite a sample*

We're now into the FOURTH DIMENSION

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@DeePon
It was well received because people thought it was the actual translation. That and it's the only English version.

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The unholy trinity of this site Sample, Rewrite and Incomplete.

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Rewrite sucks

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