Ayy we in bois. Right after Ban's Martha book this was another doujin thanks to which we started translating, one left on our wishlist.

Make sure to help the artist by buying the book if you have the opportunity to do so!
→https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=272865
→http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/55/94/040030559450.html

Feedback and general suggestions are welcome. Hope you enjoy it!

Edit: V2 out, fixed resolution problem, typeset tweaks and cleaner cleans, enjoy!

Mmm a fast translation of yanagi's c92 rider doujin.... Mmm yanagi Rider...

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-Could have used a little Level touch up
-Text could have been smaller
-Text could be centered better
-I don't know why people insist on using this ugly font
-Could have translated the sfx inside the bubbles cause I mean it's inside the bubbles - fair game
+Translation itself seems ok

Gonna get downvoted to hell for the above but I'm sure they're the same people who contribute ZERO criticism period

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You guys are crazy fast! THANK YOU!
Also umm.. Usually I don't really ask for request can you guys translate Yuran/Moonphase's new Fate Doujin?
https://e-hentai.org/g/1111194/a4b722929f/

I'm such a sucker for his artstyle.

And it also had a spanish version for some odd reason (since you guys mentioned you guys translate in Spanish too) https://e-hentai.org/g/1112308/0939c04d49/

Bless your rolls for Okita and Hiji. Though personally I'm aiming for JK/Gozen.

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The image size is inconsistent. You seem to have used sample images for the translated pages while the rest is at original size.

e: thank you for updating. :)

Last edited on 17 September 2017, 01:45.

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SSL Yanagi? Rider?
Instant download. I don't even need to read it to know it's good.

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You know looking at this, and that last page with Saber, I have to wonder if the others know about Rider & Shirou's relationship here.

I mean how jealous would Saber get if she knew just how much they fuck? :P

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Rider sure is cute when she puts her heart into it.

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>Rider
>Glasses
>Kimono
>Sex at matsuri

Downloads at the speed of light

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Thanks for the speedy TL - much appreciated, this is a great series :)

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@warellis: Given how often Shirou shouts out Saber's name for no reason at all? And with his luck, at the worst possible moments? Probably not that jealous.

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Thanks for the fix. It looks much better now.

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MASSIVE fucking kudos to actually taking advice. Way better. Only thing I'd still say is text could still be centered better. Really good example on Pg. 6 bottom right. Text width should be as uniform as possible and there should be a pretty good amount of space between the text and the border of the bubble. Being picky at this point though. Nice job

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You guys are amazing for fixing and taking everyone's advice! Good luck in the next Gacha.

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isn't that saber Alter? I don't see her ahoge

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Saber stuffing her face is comedy gold, as always.

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