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(C92) [MASHIRA-DOU (Mashiraga Aki)] Gouta o Machinagara

(C92) [ましら堂 (猿駕アキ)] ゴータを待ちながら

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Posted:2017-09-24 10:51
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Posted on 25 September 2017, 13:38 by:   Dark-wings    PM
Score +5
Holy molly, it's out. What's day today? We have both [Digital Lover (Nakajima Yuka)] DLO-03 Kare to no Yakusoku 3 and this one at the same time. Good bless us. NTR fans
Posted on 25 September 2017, 14:48 by:   OONAMI    PM
Score +29
great upload. Thanks!
Posted on 25 September 2017, 15:16 by:   TheGreyPanther    PM
Score +60
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/1051484/
Posted on 25 September 2017, 15:56 by:   loomery    PM
Score +28
Finally, it's here!

Thanks a lot for sharing the raw~
Posted on 25 September 2017, 16:17 by:   ptonec    PM
Score +25
Please anyone...could you kind enough to tell me the story....

@ryu77..... hahaha.. exactly like what I feel now...
Beside it is mashiraga's work that I feel being ntr'ed so much when it is still untranslated... hahaha
Last edited on 26 September 2017, 00:08.
Posted on 25 September 2017, 16:27 by:   sjh110    PM
Score +18
故事没看懂,是说女主角出轨被男主角知道后套路了黄毛么
Posted on 25 September 2017, 16:45 by:   ppllp0627    PM
Score +39
劇情簡單說一下
時間是前篇未來
女主成名可是男主無法
男主因為嫉妒就說出其實跟鬍渣上過床了
女主一氣之下甩了巴掌去鬍渣家
男主問說女主在不在,鬍渣騙說不在
鬍渣騙女主說男主改天才會來
女主買完東西看男主還是沒回電(男主手機壞掉)
最後答應跟鬍渣上床
鬍渣其實還蠻好,沒有內射
到凌晨女主看男主還沒回電認為被男主甩了
自願並要求內射
早上男主找到他家,看到女主只剩下內衣
Posted on 25 September 2017, 16:49 by:   Ingloo    PM
Score +25
Basically, The girl and the younger guy are bandmates and lovers. They had big plans for the future but had a falling out. The older guy is the girl's family friend how let her stay with him for easier commute. This isn't has soul crushing as mashiraga's previous works, but its still sad that the dream they worked so hard for won't come true.
Posted on 25 September 2017, 17:06 by:   artistorn    PM
Score +18
最後一頁感覺最揪心...
只是單純誤會的話,女主與男主復合不難吧
Last edited on 25 September 2017, 17:50.
Posted on 25 September 2017, 17:22 by:   shinwou    PM
Score +12
就男主手機剛好摔壞加上各種誤會

黃毛其實也沒打算真的吃
Posted on 25 September 2017, 20:29 by:   redbone    PM
Score +8
this has a more cheating feel then ntr, she had "rebound sex" with the glasses guy cause she was hurt and if her bf hadn't come when he did or she had some clothes on they might have worked it out eventually, tho I say this without being able to read the txt....

also why was he so banged up, it didn't look like she hit him hard enough for the band-aid and she didn't do anything to his arms right?
Posted on 25 September 2017, 22:15 by:   TheDiabolical    PM
Score +10
Another good one from MASHIRA-DOU. Which like the others, we probably won't see in English any time soon...........
Posted on 25 September 2017, 22:24 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +19
Good but the cliffhangers hurts a lot.
Needs sequel asap.
Posted on 25 September 2017, 22:54 by:   ryu77    PM
Score +29
Having this mangaka's works not translated feels worse than getting NTR'd.
Posted on 25 September 2017, 23:41 by:   ppllp0627    PM
Score +15
忘了說一件事情
鬍渣根本沒打算跟女主發生關係
除了騙男女主對方狀況
一開始就說要女主回去
女主自己鬧彆扭
買東西回來跟鬍渣開玩笑說該不會也很會啪啪啪
鬍渣自己說想留下就脫了
女主是自願做的
Posted on 26 September 2017, 00:07 by:   wdmzjwyc    PM
Score +12
楼上黄毛为何骗男女主,这个是误会关键,怎么看都不像不想上的样子……
Posted on 26 September 2017, 00:14 by:   bill6688    PM
Score +118
前面說的黃毛是一個城府極深騙B的人,就好像這是個典型的NTR故事
然而不是這樣的,單看這封面各位看官也能感受到這不可能僅僅是這樣的故事吧?

首先女主有才華又長得好看,她也想在音樂領域發展。然而音樂界不是憑這兩個就能成功的,這點女主和黃毛都心知肚明。

所以黃毛已經暗示的很明確了:我的確欣賞你的才華,但憑什麼我白幫你,自己都養活不好自己呢。當然了決定權在你手上,自己選擇自己的路吧。
女主也明白自己的選擇:男朋友不是做音樂的那塊材料,但是自己在他身邊很幸福。另一邊卻是自己的夢想。

全篇其實就在刻畫這兩人內心的躊躇,比如黃毛讓女主去買吃的(這可不像一般NTR的欲擒故縱,而是半真心想讓她走,卻又知道她肯定會回來)
女主則不停地看手機,回想和男主的過往,試圖給自己一個不要和黃毛發生關係的理由

然而女主還是回到了黃毛家,聽到了那聲“你也準備一下”
女主最後一次嘗試欺騙自己的本心,撥打那個沒接通的電話(何必騙自己呢,真不想做這事,沒接這電話又如何呢 ε=(´ο`*)

之後是H,一開始只是社交辭令一樣的干。然後高潮來了,女主下定了決心,主動口起了黃毛。

那句“(我)不回去了” 是這部的點睛之筆(她说的是帰らない而不是帰れない呢,这里超赞),也因此成功觸及到了黃毛的心底,黄毛也終於卸下了自己的偽裝(眼鏡),和女主角真心的H了起來

“公生桑……請別把我當小孩,讓我去吧”

在這一刻,女主最後一次回想起了男主的樣子,并和青澀小孩的自己說再見。

最後的最後,当“男主角”滿頭大汗的出現在黃毛的家前,敘述著自己的藉口又是车撞了又是手机坏了又是觉得女主小题大作,他既不認為自己有什麼錯,也沒感受到女主的轉變,他仍然只是個孩子

然後他看到了,屋子里撫摸著貝斯的女主,她已經成了一個女人。

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是說親愛的作者,你這麼行你去投青年漫畫雜誌啊!畫什麼同人誌喔,C92大家都只是來看“牝(メス)”的,你入木三分刻畫出一個“女(おんな)”是做什麼咯 OTZ
Last edited on 26 September 2017, 00:32.
Posted on 26 September 2017, 01:08 by:   TLM1986    PM
Score +12
This author makes the most "real" NTR.
Posted on 26 September 2017, 02:14 by:   shinwou    PM
Score +12
補充一下
黃毛那通電話是火大叫主角趕快來接女主角 不然換日後就吃了你馬子喔 也沒什麼騙不騙

然後主角車撞後還生悶氣跑回家一趟在出來 真的是很好笑...
Posted on 26 September 2017, 02:28 by:   jarodxg    PM
Score +8
最后这是身心都被NTR走了吧这漫画挺有教育意义的男主就是个反面教材。
Posted on 26 September 2017, 02:28 by:   ppllp0627    PM
Score -1
其實這篇我很失望
一開始想說會怎樣惡墮或是強迫
結果是男主一面消極態度一面不信任女主
導致女主完全絕望決定放棄男主
NTR成分是0
Posted on 26 September 2017, 02:34 by:   romanriquelme    PM
Score +34
This mashiraga aki's NTR is very realistic, no rape, drugs, blackmail, mind control and mind break. Where girl is able to feel guilty and a void for what she did. The worst is when a person acts without thinking and then comes the sense of guilt over the wrong choice. NTRs fail the issue of human consciousness and the human being in feeling guilty and regretting the choice made.
Posted on 26 September 2017, 02:37 by:   jarodxg    PM
Score +14
@ppllp0627

其实这种剧情更加真实,一个是毛头小伙子一个是能给自己事业上带来帮助的大叔现实中NTR大多都是这么来的,我相信不少男人年轻的时候都被这么教育过。
Posted on 26 September 2017, 02:53 by:   shinwou    PM
Score +12
不過刪掉主角的最後的戲份跟各種回想然後只有大叔跟JK的話
就變成情侶吵架 女的跑大叔家躲或被大叔撿回家發生關係這種倫本常見的套路了
Posted on 26 September 2017, 04:31 by:   ppllp0627    PM
Score +32
把全部劇情看完分析一下三人
男主:
因為自己沒有才能,而女主才能不斷發光,而且越來越有名,對自己沒有才能感到失望,甚至對女主說其實你跟鬍渣早就上過床了,時候可能後悔找女主出車禍,還說打給女主但手機關掉了(女主視點明顯說謊)知道女主在鬍渣哪裡不在意,反而直接回家休息,大概自認為女主會自動回頭找他,結果隔天發現女主沒回去才慌張去找看到後悔一幕。

女主:
即時自己出名還是希望搭檔是男主,然而男主卻因為嫉妒跟不安把女主說成隨便女人,一氣之下(我覺得女主可能也忍男主個性很久)甩了巴掌躲鬍渣家,希望男主願意來接她,結果等不到開始放棄,回去看到鬍渣的裸體,開玩笑說鬍渣是不是也很會做愛,鬍渣便要求女主脫了,猶豫一下後答應鬍渣並開始啪啪啪,要高潮時候要鬍渣就這樣,但反而被鬍渣教訓,並拔出來射在嘴裡。到凌晨還是不見男主決定完全放棄,便自願口交並說要鬍渣說到做到負責,在感受到鬍渣快射出時候緊緊抱住,並要求不要在拔除直接內射,因為這個舉動女主也向以前自己完全告別。早上知道男主來了還故意只穿內褲出現,可見完全放棄跟男主重修了。

鬍渣(本作苦主):
欣賞女主才能,邀請女主但似乎被打槍。某天小倆口吵架被莫名牽連進去,要男主來接回去但男主說車禍不舒服拒絕,要女主自己回去,但女主鬧彆扭不會去。後來叫醒女主要留下就去買吃得,沒想到女主竟然又回來,女主開玩笑說鬍渣不會也很會啪啪啪吧,鬍渣直接來狠的,要女主如果還執意要留下就脫了,兩人變啪啪啪起來。中途快射的時候問女主要射哪,女主說就這樣(內射),但鬍渣直接拔除口爆。兩人做到凌晨,看到女主竟然自願口交,於是認真起來,本想在外射,但女主要求不要拔出來,直接在裡面就好。

@jarodxg
其實最主要是男主可能還傷害過女主不少次,尤其是那句把女主說成隨便的女人,女主才會做出這種最後的抵抗。鬍渣也沒意思要上女主,還給了女主4次機會
1.直接要女主滾
2.要女主如果要留下就去買吃得
3.你在不走我們就啪啪啪
4.我絕對不會內射(但你們都無套啊)
5(女主視點).早上還是沒回應,看來根本不重視我了

男主自己無法繼續就算了,然而卻連支持女主也做不到,反而把自己沒有才能怪罪女主,明明兩人關係很好,但卻被自己完全毀掉。與其說是NTR,不如說是社會教育吧
Posted on 26 September 2017, 11:13 by:   moximoore    PM
Score +63
NTR, eh? I don't see how this is soul crushing. How many millions of relationships have gone down that exact same path.

Starts great at the beginning, have a huge fight that hurts everything, seek solace in the arms of another person (Whether or not this person is an acquaintance is optional), significant other finds out, relationship ends. Lots of young immature relationships and some more seasoned relationships go down this exact route.
Posted on 26 September 2017, 15:25 by:   OBV    PM
Score +16
Next level shit. Instant classic. (btw please translate lmao)
Posted on 26 September 2017, 20:17 by:   lie0114    PM
Score +6
講氣話是年輕
後悔也是年輕
不過估計沒後篇
只能是ntr了?
Posted on 28 September 2017, 07:03 by:   zwc521    PM
Score +17
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Last edited on 28 September 2017, 07:26.
Posted on 28 September 2017, 08:18 by:   nowittycomment    PM
Score +20
Good, realistic story. A shame that, like so many NTR/cheating works, there is no epilogue.
Posted on 03 October 2017, 01:20 by:   Johannessilentio    PM
Score +12
The girl lost the shame of showing her nakedness to the other man means that their relationship has lost strength, not even the embarrassed show of half-naked walk through the residence and be seen by her boyfriend.The feeling of shame exists for another that you do not have intimacy when the girl showed full intimacy with the man, no embarrassment even for her boyfriend to know is that their relationship is broken or close to breaking. The person accepts intimacy with the other and does not care what his boyfriend thinks.In Musa, Madoka was embarrassed when Harane saw her having sex with another man and broke up with him and disappeared. Harane was still important to her.
Posted on 14 June 2018, 13:15 by:   dan10    PM
Score +12
这是老师这么多NTR剧情了唯一对男主无感的了,果然小孩子就是小孩子,不成熟啊,活该被绿。
Posted on 16 June 2018, 05:21 by:   dokedoke    PM
Score +14
there's no real indication of NTR, maybe BORDERLINE cheating, the guy brought up quitting the band since other members were busy with college, work, etc, he even made a remark out of nowhere that she would go well with the old guy and probably made some comments about her lifestyle which caused her to slap him

1st round of "regret" sex, the old guy didn't creampie her at her request because he was afraid of getting her pregnant
2nd round which she initiates saying "there's no going back" and she tells him there won't be a kid and that's why he creampied her

the guy comes back all beat up saying his bike got burned up, whether fire or some accident, but the whole conversation can be overheard by her and the reason why she just comes out means "she don't care anymore"
Posted on 17 October 2018, 23:36 by:   reignengine    PM
Score -12
I'm going by the comments and the pictures, but I see this as an allegory to childhood dreams not panning out to what you thought it could be. She was angry at her boyfriend at the falling or and the boyfriend seemed to be insecure of the glasses guy, which is proven through she she had sex with him.

To me, she cared more about her dream than th boyfriend, who has to face the reality that their dream can't go on. She went to th friend to solace and he seemed like a decent guy, but the ending is a shitshow waiting to happen. How would her paents react if they found out he laid his hands on her? The author makes realistic and I dare say compelling NTR because the guilt is everywhere and you can see this happening in real life.

So by this thought, she seems to want to show to the boyfriend that they are over but she'll regret it and realize that for all that she just hurt someone for a brief moment of pleasure.

I don't like NTR due to past traumas but I can't stop looking at it like its some kind of wreck waiting to happen.

Her not being embarrassed at being seen naked and strumming the guitar is I want to say symbolic of her going after her dreams and willing to abandon her boyfriend do it. Glasses guy being the NTR dude is okay looking and he seems decent but he also got into it so the boyfriend would wined hate them or he'll try to reconcile.

I can't blame the girl as people wan solace and comfort in their darkest times but to effectively say fuck you to your lover and not communicate properly will lead to a path of pain and sadness. She wanted to hurt him more at the end by showing up just in panties and getting his attention, glasses guy doesn't seem to like that idea and you could see he boys heart break when he saw it.

Also chasing dreams is fine but sometimes the reality is cruel and not facing that reality can cause more hardships, sure they wanted to be musicians and make it big br she kinda fucked it up too at the end by showing herself to the boy.

This is becoming a rant but I just want to end this that the artist's works really stand the heart and you feel bad for e drying involved except the NTR dude caus they seem well they are still assholes. Glasses guy is that also because he should realize she was in a fragile state and instead of helping her he fucks her and that just opens more fans of worms.
Posted on 23 August 2020, 14:40 by:   ilegs    PM
Score +16
男孩还是那个男孩,女孩却已经成长为了女人

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