A comic by artist Jay Naylor featuring his characters Charles and Lynne, the former acting on changes that he is going through.

Artist Pages:
https://www.patreon.com/jaynaylor
http://jaynaylor.com/
http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/fisk/
http://jayrnaylor.tumblr.com/
https://twitter.com/JayDrawins

Furries with pubes. Oh and knowing Naylor it's going to end in NTR somehow.

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I'm waiting for the reveal that this is all "virgin vision" and that Lynne's actually been rocking his world too hard.

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Jesus everything this little shit says is so fucking edgy.

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Don't understand the cringe some people have, this is how you generally attract women. Don't beg for permission like you have some lower status than her, act on what you want, if she says no then stop and take it as no big deal.

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Only things I hate about this is the expected blatant meme philosophy and that fucking trademark "smugly sipping the coffee mug, head lowered and eyes calmly closed, basking in clear intellectual superiority" pose in page 14.

Otherwise this is better what he has done lately. Ahegao, squirting and hot chick. Everything I like.

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Backgrounds are for cultural marxist libtard SJWs.

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All naylors comics need a textless version

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And just like that, that little Doberman cutie turned into the kind of smug dick that you shy away from at bars because he might drop something in your drink.

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Getting a meh from me now. When I see Lynne I expect her to be dominate and 90% of the time riding her brother, not submissive to mr.my-balls-dropped-so-deal-with-it.

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When I saw her giving him a rimjob on page 14, I knew she's manipulating him. She's such a dom that she's getting off on giving someone else control. I guarantee she'll pull the rug out from under him before the comic ends.

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I think that his stories could get a lot more interesting if tried to variate between them. If I had the chance to change I would make have Genwyn here not giving a single fuck about his friend being with Lynne, even almost breaking the fourth wall to mock his whole "I have changed" attitude then we get the classic Jay Naylor TM story and at the end Genwyn calmly goes "Ok sis break up with him and throw him out" before she does it with a smile on her face. He then goes on how no one can control his sister almost ignoring that he practically does and then they go and have sweet sweet vanilla incestuous sex.

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Shit story, per the norm for Naylor. Wherefore art thou oh textless version

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I don't really get the point here. Lynn is a huge slut, of course you can get away with all that shit.

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I think I said this in a prior upload of this comic, but...

It would be fab if, at the end, the little brother just poured himself some coffee, said "Cool story bro", and left the room to go play video games.

He could still be jealous about it (the relationship with his sister is complicated), but he doesn't have to play into the obvious "bitch brother" role that this so-called friend of his is trying to force on him.

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Huh, first that Double Play doujin, now this. Today is just full of surprise twists

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That ending was hilarious

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DARK SOULS FTW!!

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Really want to see what's going on in there

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Welp... That just happened...

Why is this guy still getting paid for this shit?

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Best ending ever!

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@TheViktor Same reason people post their comments here: Naylor makes good shit.

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Oy, I beat him without taking damage! Alas am but straight sword scrub...

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Not the ending I expected but I'm glad it's what we got. HA!

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The virgin Charles versus the Chad Thundercock

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Well, it will be hard work beating Artorias without being hit. Mostly due to his big moveset and depending on the dps of his build. I believe in you little guy! Chase your dream, or your sister. Whatever works c:

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I live for the day that my Dark Souls skills can get me action with someone like Lynne.

I LIVE FOR THAT DAY!

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First off I have nothing against the author Naylor is one of the best out there. I like the comic up until the dogs best friend pulls a dick move out of nowhere. Other than that always love Naylors comics and hope to see more in the future

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No one's characters flip sexuality more than Naylor's... NO ONE. XD

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9/10, I wanted to see the wolf smashing the little dog.

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Almost definitely my favorite story by Jay Naylor, the ending was exactly what I wanted but not expected.

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Not ragingly fond of the notion that a person can't be bisexual (that phrase could be "just reminding my friend of his love of cock" would have worked), but otherwise this was exactly the ending that was best suited for that smug little dickhead.

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Turns out it's a trick, and being unable to cum in her mouth due to taking damage means she'll let him cum in her pussy instead. You know she'd do that.

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This might be the closest thing to a happy ending since I started reading this guy

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Guys i'm scared!
This was a good comic! It had humor, the scenes were hot, and it ended on a note that wasn't "man fuck that guy". Well i mean it ended on that, but not with the reader thinking that. Naylor's Evolving...
W-will traps suddenly not be gay?

haha, naw traps will always be gay. But maybe I can read a naylor comic without disgust now.

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As always, his main character is an ass ( * ), and the girls' personality, totally different from what her brother says or what we saw in the last comic she appeared, Jay Naylor doesn't know how to keep a character constant.

Last edited on 10 November 2017, 02:40.

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I feel a better twist if the friend didn't call an Ex but took the doberman to bed to show he's better.

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The first comment said it was going to end in NTR somehow. Well... He wasn't wrong, but I doubt this was what he meant.

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Still want charles to go bathe in a vat of roger rabbit dip.

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P33
How does this works?

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Ugh... Look, it's TOTALLY fine for a virginal character to get a sudden burst in confidence after sufficiently rocking someone's world. (I once made my first girlfriend cum SIX TIMES in less than half an hour. I dare ANYONE to not have an ego boost after that! lol) Does that mean you HAVE to be such a douche bag about it?

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@RobDollar

For Naylor, apparently it does.

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