Nice doodling, is this what you are doing during class? But serious, this is quite good, you can make this into a good story. Thanks for sharing this.

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I agree, this is quite good. I liked it except for the complete brainwashing near the end. The way I see it, the whole point of gender-bending stories is to see how the person reacts to being the opposite gender. When the person is brainwashed into thinking that they were always that gender, then you lose the most important element. It then changes into a standard sex/love story and no longer feels like a gender-bending story.

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@brianca159 I hold the opposite opinion this is a full gender bending story with a full on finish the point is not just the reaction but also the finish as in brainwashing them into being a women. it ties everything together in a neat little feminized bow.

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Both types of story is good but I prefer the one without brainwashing. Eventually accepts being a submissive woman.

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good story, but why did they need to turn a man into a woman if they were going to brainwash her/him anyways? Is that the only service those people offer or what?

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Page five. So that's what he's doing when he's not demanding more pictures of Spider-Man.

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