[Okamisaga] The Volunteer [English]

The art is nice, the grammar is shit. So hit, in fact, that I'm tempted to give it a 2/2.5.

But then again, there's something interesting to the visual part of it, so I just won't rate it at all.

It's a shame. Really shows just how much pure grammar (it's not even about writing this time) can ruin the... hmmmmmmm... immersion.)

Posted on 19 October 2017, 22:15 by: Zeikfried

I saw the hole: "I hope she laced herself to the brim with poison and was hired to kill the thing and everyone in that organization."

Posted on 20 October 2017, 05:11 by: hoigoigoi

This is worse than eating simple rick wafers.

Posted on 20 October 2017, 21:52 by: TheRivanKing

Scientists publish new research initiatives into making synthetic extra virgin olive oil, sans olive.

Posted on 22 October 2017, 06:47 by: EDON

Its my fetish but the story is fucked and the grammer is fucked.

Posted on 23 October 2017, 23:20 by: FarkyMac

This dialogue is atrocious.

Posted on 30 October 2017, 13:04 by: marsupilami123

All your girls are belong to us.

Posted on 18 May 2018, 14:22 by: DarknessAttempt

This is reminiscent of the Literotica story The Specimen. Similar themes, but that had a better story.

Posted on 06 January 2023, 03:50 by: hugottssu

贴吧观光团

Posted on 06 January 2023, 06:13 by: 3o3lss

贴吧来的

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language:	english
artist:	wulfsaga \| okamisaga
female:	mind break rape tentacles vore
other:	comic