This was my first time re-editing something. I occasionally think about doing this when a good story is poorly translated or badly edited but always figure it's not worth the effort. In this case though, the 'official' translation was unfortunately hot garbage, like most are. So as fan of the artist and a huge fan of Chun-li, I wanted to go ahead and fix that. This should help the story make more sense, and as a personal bonus I got to make a fun credit page. It revisits my favorite part of the last chapter, Chun-li's masturbation. It's a 'what if' scenario where her shlick session doesn't get swept under the rug and she lets the cat out of the bag with brutal honesty.

Good story until the last 2 frames, then it got weird and stupid.

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Chun li better win

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@GuroLover12 I can't fap if she wins. She needs to lose.

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waste of talent.

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Thanks for the awesome re-edit, I've noticed the word "find" is missing in the sentence "So that's why I couldn't find it." (pag 11), other than that this is WAY better than the original translation, loved the funny credit page as-well, nice touch!

@carcaliusca Fuck off.

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This is so fucking hot! I got a hot feeling that Rose is one of the cannibals and if so she has the perfect chance to molest and eat them while they are unconscious hehe. Can't wait to see what happens in the brain world especially with Mai back in the action. Mai, Chun Li, and Cammy the three best girls!

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Well that took an unexpected turn. Have to remember to look at the category tags.

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I normally don't like reedits, but this is just so much better then the first one. Pretty much they are mixing the plot of Source Code and Inception, so that Chun Li can go deeper, and then has to be killed to get to the next level up. I think he is setting it up for some consensual cannibalism snuff.

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A bit light on the good stuff this time, but that's probably intentional for the next part.

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That was a bit disappointing.

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I hope juri han show up... She has hot feet!

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The story is getting too complicated for me.

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p28, JUST-THEIR-FACES O_o

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Soo sad there is no part4 even if you want to pay it! I would really see Mai die again and her friends die too!

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@sinfo Supposedly we'll get a part 4 around February 5th.

Actually scratch that, I have no clue when the next part is going to happen, or if it's going to happen at all. The artist keeps on getting distracted on other projects and seems to give less of a fuck about the continuation of this comic.

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有没有人开汉化啊

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本来就是国人作品，不知道raw在哪

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Last edited on 01 March 2020, 01:41.

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I think Part 4 has been completed, however I cannot read Chinese so i'm not entirely sure, does anyone have it?

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@claralover No, it hasn't happen, and it's most likely never going to happen, it has been over 4 years.

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So what is the plot?

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