My first attempt at translating. Story's pretty simple, so I think it's okay, but there might be some mistakes. Also, english is not my first language, so the phrasing might be awkward as well. Please, if you see any errors or something, do let me know.

Anyway, here's a chapter by Jean Louis in which two dudes go Pokemon(Bushimon)GO!-ing with not so hidden intentions. Simple but cool, I liked the art style and the female character.

Source: https://e-hentai.org/s/7b3864cb6e/1018320-137

I remember the first few weeks this game was first released, it was like 70% guys in my city and the girls were underage or not pretty. Don't think I ever saw a hot older woman playing this. Hentai with their unrealistic scenarios. T_T

Good job on this, don't see many errors, if any.

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Not bad for a first attempt, a few phrases here and there as you said that could use proofreading (First page-Panel three: There's three would be better than They're three). As well as some bubbles not translated (though the ones like that are just slurping noises or such I assume :P).

Overall good work, look forward to more from you. TBH- You are already light years ahead of certain other uploaders that I shall not name here who post translations...

Also, love that to see her say no sex and then procede to blowjob without much resistance. XD

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I love huge tits! I want to catch a mamamon!

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I wanna be the very best
Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test
To fuck them is my cause
I will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
Teach mamamon to understand
The power that's inside my balls
Mamamon! Gotta catch 'em all!
It's you and me
I know it's my destiny
Mamamon! Oh, you're my best (sex) friend
In a world we must defend
Mamamon! Gotta catch 'em all
A heart so true
Our courage will pull us through
You teach me, and I'll teach you
Mamamon!
Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all

MAMAMON!!!

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as always I think using a "huge" dick as a trigger is just lazy writing and a crutch, and nowadays with as many guys out there in hentailand with "huge" dicks everyone has one and if everyone has one then no one has one....

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Ok that BigDix part caught me off guard LOL

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@Thanks : Thanks! (?)

@Megaton : Yeah, that's the kind of awkward phrasing I was talking about. If I detect a couple more of those I might edit them and reupload. The untranslated bubbles, yeah, they're are onomatopoeia mostly. Thing is, I don't really know how to translate them. I can tell what most of those mean, but I'm not sure about its english equivalents. That's why I also kept the japanese style moans (kyaa, ngu, etc). Thanks for the comment!

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Just two small mistakes I noticed while reading:
Page 12: "Did I came...?" should be "Did I come...?"
Page 13: "Did my dick felt that good?" should be "Did my dick feel that good?"

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