First time translating, hope it is acceptable.

Working on completing the remaining pages.

Feed back is welcome.

Used both Japanese and Spanish version for translation material.

oh! great i bumpt in another "Virgin bait" agian... huh... eh... huuu....
nice art thou...

Base +12, Cheese Ninja -10, jfragrettel +8

Waiting for the final version.
Keep it up your good work.

Base +9, jfragrettel +8

Change font, please!
There is like 1000000 fonts and you use comic sans.

Otherwise keep up the good work

@Calicko
Because it's a shitty font from 20 years ago and you should be ashamed for liking it

Last edited on 03 November 2017, 11:43.

Base +16, himalllloi +5, jfragrettel +8, delta82112 +6

nice....keep up the good work.....
thx a lot man...

Base +11, jfragrettel +8, delta82112 +6

what's wrong with comic sans?

Base +6, jfragrettel +8

In "English".

Base +9, jfragrettel +8

great first try!! keep up the good work, cheers..

Base +6, jfragrettel +8, delta82112 +6

i hope he will keep translating the other works of this artist too. Love the type of this art. fking sexy milfs

Base +12, denogginator +3, jfragrettel +8, delta82112 +6

Appreciate the effort but you gonna need some1 to proof read (or w/e its called) & an editor, the pacing overall is weird and there're some weird sentences which kinda turn me off a bit.
Still love it tho, thank you :)

Base +7, jfragrettel +8

Its OK to keep Japanese honorifics in.

Base +10, jfragrettel +8, delta82112 +6