Third time's the charm, we guess. We looked at both previous releases and decided to re-translate and edit this one to give you guys something with a greater degree of accuracy and readability. (And after that reddit argument, I was ready to bite somebody's head off.)

Translator: Rotoscopic
Editor: Constipat8
QC: Axalon

Raws: https://e-hentai.org/g/1007887/40fa6f7697/

Follow @rotoscopic on twitter for absolutely nothing.

A third challenger takes the stand!

I've never been one to be super picky about perfect 100% accuracy so long the dialogue flows and looks good, but there's definitely nothing wrong with having all these options, especially since different people value different aspects of translations. Thanks for putting the time in.

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Hehehe......okay then xD

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Personal opinion here, but after reading all 3 translations, I like this one best. It keeps it really cute and sweet ;w;

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Just goes to show how great Moketa is, that one of their works would get three different translations.

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Straight into to the cute/vanilla folder.

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This whole situation serves to point out just how awesome Moketa's works are.

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A third time? Lol.
Now we have a challenger to the Aoi Tiduru's story, with 3 translations :D
Who will go for 4? xP

Thanks for the re-re-translation xD

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lesson learned. if you mess up with Moketa's work someone else will come up with better translation.

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Fuck that's cute.

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Oof, I've seen double alt translations before, but three this time? This is reaching meme status. .-. Then again, I know the guys who worked on this so I honestly can say that this is probably the best out of the three based on the work of the guys before.

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Eagerly awaiting translation no. 4 in esperanto.

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Honestly, it's a nice translation and I appreciate the effort. I only wished that people could be as passionate about translating these as they are about re-translating them.

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I like it. Seems better than mine. The differences here are minor though, compared to the differences between Black_Viper's and mine.

And what Reddit argument?

Also... You used my redraws? Darn, you should have just told me then. I would've just sent you all the textless PSD files.

Last edited on 22 November 2017, 23:13.

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@Hinagiku Katsura

This argument: https://www.reddit.com/r/doujinshi/comments/7e6zp2/mikanchan_is_familiar_with_sex_moketa/dq2zpfy/

During a group chat with a bunch of people over Team Koinaka's Discord over that thread, it lead up to me and Rotoscopic saying something along the lines of:

Me: It would be really funny to re-edit this with better localization just to shut off the arguments.
Roto: I can localize it for you, if you want.
Me: Oh really? Am I down to do this?
Roto: Fuck yeah let's do it.

Right after that, we popped up Google Docs and he typed in the re-translated script as I was editing at the same time...
26 hours later.... the child was born.

I used your redraws in pages 14 and 15. This project was really decided on the spur of the moment, I didn't even think about it haha.

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Third time's the charm indeed! I'm glad to see this comic got so much love, even though it may have started for the wrong reasons. I confess this being my first translation I made far more errors than I'm proud of, but I'm happy to see that my localization efforts were appreciated by some. Excellent work on the translation guys, this seems like a great middle ground between accuracy and fluidity of dialog.

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@VodkaAllDay

Wow, holy crap. I didn't intend to start a war. What is this, Moketa: Civil War? Haha.

But yeah, I definitely agree that my translations have always been really rigid and has a strictly Japanese format....? If that's the right way to put it.
I'm afraid of changing the author's words into something else at the cost of details and meanings, even if it sounds more English .

Localization, huh. Looks like I'll have to be more liberal with my word choices from now on. Maybe I'll try to do an extreme redneck localization. Haha.

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@ Hinagiku Katsura: Keep at it with your own method, not everybody prefers "localization" since the characters in 99% of the works aren't "local" to begin with.

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Good localization, for reference: https://e-hentai.org/g/743731/f3caa5ff16/

;)

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This girl... reminds me too much of Aguri from "Gamers!"...

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FUCK! That is cute.

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So adorable...

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Page 8 penis panel
Black_Viper one said "so big"
allenallenallen333 said "okay"
Rotoscopic & Constipat8 said "whoa"
RAW https://e-hentai.org/s/9aea2bc91a/1007887-230 said "a.. aa" so it is up to each translator to convey the meaning of those aaas.
screw it, everyone pulling something theirselves

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Sex before even ever kissing?

What is this goku and chichi shit? Lol

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