An Undertale doujin by Namboku, translated and edited into English by me. Scans by Super Shanko.
Something I've been working on in my spare time for a while. I was pretty lenient with the translating, preferring readability over being too literal. Feedback is appreciated, please let me know if you find any mistakes with the translation/editing.

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=61483286

http://alice-books.com/item/show/5759-3

page 7 "heterosexual sex isn't covered..." I do find that funny and true. I mean really? No basics? They didn't even tell you what hole was correct or not. Although bible camp did.

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Mmmph, hands-on sex-ed from Tori.....

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Oh shit this is really good! They even have details like monsterkid's lack of arms and sneaking in one of Toriel's dialogue mugshots. And somehow you (Nenio) managed to perfectly capture the same kind of natural personality with your translation that the game did??? You did a really excellent job as far as readability went, literally nothing was in any way stilted or awkward.

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Shit! I can't thank you enough for translating one of the better Undertale doujin out there.

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ooooo kaay... there was yuri, there was furry, there was a dinosaur girl, there was bbw, there were teachers, a threesome, an undyne (species) girl, a nerd girl complete with glasses, buck teeth and lab coat... wow

@TastelessWhiskey, the complete line is actually "heterosexual sex isn't covered in too much detail", so yes, at least the basics are teach...

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oh fuck yes!
finally in english, THANK YOU!

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I have the weirdest boner right now

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*Holds phone and makes a Mr Bison impression* YES! YES! YES!

Last edited on 30 November 2017, 14:17.

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"Undertale porn huh? And with a non-canon coupling to boot. Well I guess I can safely give this a pa-"

>anime undyne in a gym teacher track suit

"W-well, maybe just a little..."

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This was much better than I would have expected an Undertale doujin to be.

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Page 11 "But Toriel, I'm a fish! I don't exactly have nipples!" would've made me spit my drink.

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What goddamn business does this darn fish have being this hot? Jesus Christ Namboku's Undyne is literally the spitting image of perfection in my mind...

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