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[Nagare Ippon] Junai Collapse Ch. 1-1.5 [English] [desudesu, R-IC]

[流一本] 純愛コラプス 第1-1.5話 [英訳]

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Posted on 16 December 2017, 14:34 by:   eric0contact    PM
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Part One translated by Desu Desu , part 1,5 and 2 by R-ICtrad.

Part 2 coming up ... ;-)
Posted on 16 December 2017, 15:03 by:   Look A Moth    PM
Score +216
Fuck this is finally getting translated? Thank god, and thank you.
Posted on 16 December 2017, 16:53 by:   Kaneko    PM
Score +60
Hell yeah.
Posted on 16 December 2017, 17:10 by:   JohnnyGB3043    PM
Score +44
I'd given up hope of ever seeing this continued, thanks for picking it up.

For those looking for the raws here you go:
https://e-hentai.org/g/646958/07c60bb59a/
Last edited on 17 December 2017, 22:36.
Posted on 16 December 2017, 17:10 by:   mondo2000    PM
Score -16
Link to the raws?
Posted on 16 December 2017, 23:52 by:   Altayrl    PM
Score +42
Wow, you listened to my suggestion! Thanks a lot for translating it!
Posted on 16 December 2017, 23:59 by:   DeadMan1101    PM
Score +35
Thank you bro!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted on 17 December 2017, 01:31 by:   Bay K.W. Arde    PM
Score +68
FInally. FINALLY!!!!!
Posted on 17 December 2017, 06:23 by:   Solomus    PM
Score +64
A Nagare Ippon work? The holidays truly do bring about miracles.
Posted on 17 December 2017, 23:15 by:   Harcoo    PM
Score +58
Many thanks for continuing this. I can't believe it's been four years since the first chapter was translated.

This girl is still one of the hottest drawn by Nagare Ippon. Page 28 is especially amazing.
Posted on 18 December 2017, 12:30 by:   Nilh    PM
Score +60
man gratz xD for this
Posted on 18 December 2017, 22:00 by:   Forgunia    PM
Score +119
You have to be a special kind of asshole to fuck your own friend's girlfriend.
Posted on 27 December 2017, 13:54 by:   michka    PM
Score +5
Nice. Passive ending tho
Posted on 27 December 2017, 14:34 by:   zinos6    PM
Score +16
>permanent hair removal
Fuck you
Posted on 27 December 2017, 15:00 by:   SyriasX    PM
Score -100
Why is it that in these stories the boyfriend/MC doesnt just sell the videos its basically the end of the relationship as anything can now worm its way into the girl might as well ruin her life and make some cash
Posted on 27 December 2017, 16:38 by:   moximoore    PM
Score +95
Ah, continuing the enduring trend in NTR, "I'm doing this for him." Just once, I would love to see someone call them on their bullshit, "No. sweetheart. You're just a whore."

I love MC's final line at the end. A nice end cap for this story
Posted on 27 December 2017, 20:39 by:   reaper_day    PM
Score +73
It's always the same with the NTR, all of them end up in the best part!!!!, i wanna know what the boyfriend decided that "good for you" sounds like "leave me alone bitch" or he just gonna pretend nothing happen????
Posted on 27 December 2017, 21:25 by:   coNTRa69    PM
Score +16
Ch. 2's translation is kind of poor...hoping for a better TL eventually.
Posted on 27 December 2017, 23:42 by:   Harcoo    PM
Score +14
Finally, translated. Thanks a bunch!

So she gets trained by that guy for a year? That seems unusually long. No wonder she's gone full cock slave at the end. The blackmail angle felt contrived, though.

One thing I disliked about the chapter was how her face was never fully shown because the scenes were taped. Even in the end she still partially covered it. Watching an outwardly pure girl give into pleasure simply isn't the same without a few good ahegao faces. So that's a shame.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 00:00 by:   thebloodwalker    PM
Score -100
Here is my fanfic about what is going to happen. Starting from the last page.

When Chihiro said that she does not have a curfew anymore, Satoru's little last remains of hope that the woman of those videos was not her were destroyed. He could not deny anymore that those were just coincidences and his fears were a reality. Thanks to the last video, his trust in her, his love, his manhood, his confidence, his dreams of a future with her are now dust.

"Good for you", those words as he looked away from her and kept walking had a tone of indifference. Chihiro is just eager to have sex with him to both satisfy her sex addiction as well as mitigate her guilt of her affair as well as a relief to stop lying to him. She runs to him and grabs his arm and asks him to let her stay in his house because she just wants to stay by his side. Satoru just responds "okay" but Chihiro notices no excitement in his voice which both worries and scares her. Sakai not only told her that he would not know anything, but after the last video he said he would leave them alone and let them "live happily ever after". She panics a little but remains in her resolve and simply tells him that she will take care of him and cook dinner while he rests. She goes to kiss his lips and he replies, but the images of the videos of where that mouth was makes him look away telling that he feels tired. Chihiro felt that cold kiss and panics some more.

At Satoru's place she notices that his place was not as cleaned as she remembered the last time she was there, it has a gloomy atmosphere as Satoru's face. She quickly tells him that he should take a bath while she cleans and makes a snack with whatever he has in the fridge. He nodded and went to the bathroom.
Chihiro is more scared than ever "Could Sakai have broken his word?... he told me he would not know anything". She starts cleaning starting from where there is more mess, the living room. She sees the DVD's and that one appears to be in the player. She waits until she hears him getting into the bath and she watches the video. Her fears were confirmed, What Sakai simply said that they were videos for himself to remember were right there in Satoru's home, breaking his word to her. She desperately puts the other similar marked discs and they are all there. She realizes that Satoru not only knows she was unfaithful but also that she insulted his manhood and confidence. Her tears cannot stop from falling from her eyes as she is on her knees saying "I'm so sorry". She undresses and goes to the bathroom desperately to try and fix at least something about their relationship and goes to try to get him hard with a fellatio... then a paizuri.... She even tries to have him lay down and service him... but Satoru is not getting hard.... Chihiro desperately apologizes for everything she said and did in those videos and tries to explain what happened and to tell him that she still loved him all along. But Satoru just said that he just wants to sleep, and apoligizes as well, he then tells her that he does not believe he can ever satisfy her as Sakai (now he knows who the guy was) did.

Chihiro gets out of the bathroom, gets dressed and leaves the house crying. Not only her body was toyed with, but her heart as well. She blamed herself but at the same time she gets enraged and calls Sakai, telling him she wants to stay at his place, which he gladly agrees to. They had a casual converstion and then get undressed, when she bites his dick hard and makes him fall to the floor in pain. She ties him up and goes to get a knife in the kitchen, to cut it off. Sakai didn't expect this result and said that he thought he would never guess or that he would not watch the videos. She does not believe him and gets closer, telling him that he betrayed her good will and because of what both of them did, she cannot be with Satoru anymore. So she will cut it off to at least bring her peace, no matter if she dies or goes to jail... Sakai gets scared and more desperate. He begs for mercy and that in exchange he will never touch her again and will make sure Satoru will take her back. Chihiro does not believe him at first, but Sakai insists on a plan that will make him be with her. She makes him swear that he will not touch her from there on and that he has one year to fix things or she will kill him and kill herself.

Satoru and Chihiro officially broke up, She asked him in order to break up to give all videos to her, telling him needs this to move on. Satoru eventually recovers and Chihiro managed to become just a friend to him. She also goes through therapy to improve herself.

One year passed. Satoru met many girls but he is just not into relationships since he cannot get hard. On his birthday he goes to a mixer after so much insistence from his new friends, telling him they will help him get a girlfriend. There is a lot of talk and drinks, Satoru started to get buzzed but he was being offered drinks and pressured to take it while they were talking. The last thing he remembered that night was that they were all going to a hotel, he passed out inside the cab.

The next morning he wakes up and sees the hotel room. As he tried to put the pieces together he looks at the person lying next to him, only to find out it was Chihiro, who was sleeping naked. He looks around and sees her vagina filled, and around the bed there were water bottles and viagra pill cases. He panics first and then se sees two dvd's on his night stand. One that says "evidence" and another that says "apology: see this first". the apology video is Sakai apologizing for everything he did and asks him to not blame her. He manipulated her feelings and kindness to make her his plaything and he should take all of the blame. He tells him that Chihiro spent the year recovering her body and mind while still in love with him, and he swears he did not touch her after that last video because she threatened to cut him off. He explained that the mixer was all a plan to have him drink and make him spend his birthday night having sex with Chihiro just like their first night. As a symbol to help them start all over again. The evidence video contains all the sex Satoru and Chihiro had as she was also sorry but happy to be with him once more.... and also... it was her dangerous day. Sekai explains that he is willing to pay all DNA tests to confirm that if the kid is conceived, it s definately Satoru's. This was Sekai's parting gift and will leave the rest to both of them.

Chihiro hugs Satoru from behind with tears in her eyes. Apologizing for tricking him but that she could not forget about him and that from now on it will be him and only him. but if he does not accept her, she will understand but will give birth to the child and raise it herself, as the child is a memory of the times she was trully happy with him. Satoru feels cornered, but tells her that he will not run away and he will take responsibility. Chihiro hugs him and tel;ls him that she will spend the rest of her life atoning for what she did and even if he will not love her like before she will remain by his side and faithful. Satoru looks through the window only to be kissed and feels a pill with water being pushed down his throat, only to see her with another viagra case. Chihiro tells him the room was reserved for another full day
Last edited on 28 December 2017, 04:00.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 01:05 by:   longjohn1123    PM
Score -38
thebloodwalker... that story felt too realistic dude, haha, you know this story feels like something that could happen irl aswell, haha...
Last edited on 20 January 2018, 19:37.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 01:07 by:   Forgunia    PM
Score -100
I know these netorare stories have most of the time a bad ending for the MC, and my complaint is not about that. No, it's about the fact that the 'suspension of disbelief' is entirely disrupted when he receives those discs, but keeps pretending nothing bad is happening. Even in the hypothethical scenario that he is one of those guys with a cuck fetish, there is still the issue of broken trust between him and his girlfriend. She did it behind his back! So even if he were one of those guys with such a fetish, shouldn't it still be normal for him to at least break off the relationship or be angry because of her lying and betrayal? You know, because she did it behind his back? Don't get me wrong, the art is great, and the most of the story is great, but I can only give 4 stars because of the illogical ending.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 04:00 by:   thebloodwalker    PM
Score +0
thanks @ longjohn1123
Posted on 28 December 2017, 04:30 by:   Asarta    PM
Score +28
A year and no sex right nobody going to last a year with blue balls for one girl ever.
Last edited on 28 December 2017, 10:02.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 04:42 by:   Zantos    PM
Score +5
@Asarta

Specially when said girl has been knocked up at least twice by someone else during that time lol

Heh. I wonder. Will she attempt to have sex with Satoru, get him to finish in her, and try to say Satoru's the dad? Well, anyway, they'll end up in one fucked up relationship if he decides to stay with her, as she's gonna be going after some dicking behind his back on a consistent basis cuz she's now extremely promiscuous and loose.

Anyway. This is pretty old by now, glad to see it got someone interested to TL it after all this time. Nagare does some really hot girls doing sexy stuff (Great ahegaos too).
Posted on 28 December 2017, 06:06 by:   bergil    PM
Score -51
Vanillafags just can't deal with the reality of a fictional story.
Last edited on 28 December 2017, 15:19.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 08:20 by:   MacacoLendario    PM
Score +5
Does this work continue?
Any epilogue?
If you have I want to link plz
Posted on 28 December 2017, 14:08 by:   Dzumi    PM
Score +4
@bergil - "hope the epilogue gets translated too". There is an epilogue. Where? Send some info, pls.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 17:05 by:   moximoore    PM
Score -100
@bergil

Vanillafags, NTRfags, furryfags... We're all fags here. Nothing wrong with fags having opinions. That's what make these stories resonate with other fags.
Posted on 28 December 2017, 23:39 by:   justineonetwothree    PM
Score +6
In the French translation, tagged on this site as a rewrite, there are five additional pages between pages 61 and 62 of this translation. I looked for the raws to verify that the extra French pages are in the same place in the story but the link provided by JohnnyGB3043 shows the gallery as deleted and I couldn't find the raws anywhere else. Not to say that they're not out there, just that I couldn't find them in the time I waste...uh, spent looking for them. A link to French rewrite is below.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1039852/a89d6559c2/?p=2
Posted on 29 December 2017, 08:11 by:   eric0contact    PM
Score +2
Hi everyone.

First of all, thanks for the thanks :)

For those who ask if there's an epilogue, there's not.
Since it's been released, we would have dig it.

As for the French Rewrite mentionned, it was one of my first shot, in a time I hadn't a translator captured in my cave. I took the 4 more pages from others works of Nagare and add it in the story which , even if the theme approach the original, has nothing to do with it. A beginner creative liberty let's say ;-)

Now I translate respectfully the original works. :)

Oh, and for the fans, I'm starting Koukan Jyouken...
Stay tuned.

See ya

R-IC
Posted on 29 December 2017, 11:40 by:   justineonetwothree    PM
Score -7
eric0contact - Ah, that explains why one of the characters in the extra pages came out of nowhere. *grin* Still, the French version was an interesting read and a much better rewrite than some I've seen. Thanks for all the effort you put into your translations.
Posted on 02 January 2018, 02:19 by:   AtotehZ    PM
Score +13
I looked for this a few weeks ago, the translation of the 2nd chapter that is, now I know why I couldn't find it. Nice job :)
As for the story, she became a tad too slutty for me, would've preferred she had stayed ashamed of her actions, just unable to fight against her own lust. Maybe end it with her being abandoned by both dudes.
Posted on 08 January 2018, 20:41 by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score -100
i knew the ending was gonna pathetic like this but sure the art is great still kinda annoy me every time when mc won't do shit about it hentai logic thou

anyway you guys have some NTR revenge ? like mc beat the shit out of cuck guy or fuck his girl madly after it
Posted on 16 January 2018, 08:15 by:   guren07    PM
Score +6
69 pages! And the last page is worthy of the number 69. Lol
Posted on 03 February 2018, 00:02 by:   gunsn1per    PM
Score +9
...That's it?
Posted on 21 December 2018, 12:32 by:   qwiql    PM
Score +23
Go on a date with another guy, coz ur working (this is why she is a whore anyway). Drunk. Fuck with another guy. Thrown away like a thrash. True ending for ntr'ed girls.

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