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[valdam] Litmus Vol.2 - The teacher wearing a skirt [English]

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Posted:2017-12-20 13:18
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Language:English  
File Size:10.48 MiB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:77 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.12

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Posted on 20 December 2017, 13:18 by:   valdam    PM
Uploader Comment
I have a question.

why low rating? or why blame my picture?
what is a problem?

I don`t understand Litmus vol.2`s low rating. It`s only 1.0 stars.
I try to upgrade my drawing skill and translate before in last version, people said that
trash tranlate so I try to fix it.

and It`s not guro or murder. not blood and not crime story. It`s normal.
of course, It`s gay or trans story but there are many kind of this in ehentai.

If you think my picture or my comics are bullshit, or my comics makes youe feeling very badly.
please tell me using relpy or write comments below.

I`m not follow making money through makig comics, it`s for my fun. but this time it`s very stressful.
so you tell me only one comment / one time. I decide to quit making my comics any more.
and it will be stop to upload my comics in ehentai.

please tell me your opinion, just use only english. not koream. I have already many anti-followers who hate my style and picture in korea. so I hate them too. I don`t want to know their opinion.

plus, this manga`s translate is not good? it`s awkward english?

I don`t have a regret to quit drawing or making manga. so If people don`t like my style and hate me
I absolutely quit without hesitate.


한국어 멘트/의견 거부 합니다
Posted on 20 December 2017, 14:22 by:   bengirl    PM
Score -5
not bad 。but i think im not interested in gay。
Posted on 20 December 2017, 16:21 by:   tooshyforthis    PM
Score +5
@valdam I think it's a cute story, the artstyle is fine, and the translation is clear enough.
Posted on 20 December 2017, 16:42 by:   RedSpot    PM
Score +15
I agree with tooshy, this is not bad at all, and I look forward to the next volume.
Posted on 20 December 2017, 16:46 by:   elgringo    PM
Score +91
On behalf of the silent majority, I thank you for the sharing of your work.
You can probably still improve and we'll be looking forward for more works in the future.

Are you korean? Just wondering as you use english language and we have strict rules about the separation of asian and non-asian works into separate categories.
Posted on 20 December 2017, 16:55 by:   YuJay    PM
Score +32
Valdam, you have a talent most people on here don't have, you shouldn't quit making comics because people are leaving a bad rating when most of them are just here to just fap.
I wouldn't say eHentai is the best place to find critic reviews of your work, a lot of people don't even know how to get on here, a forum or imageboard is better as it's more open.

Though I haven't read the entirety of your work, it's not bad at all. I would only say work on your storey board a bit, small details people can relate to or create a connection with that characters feelings go a long way in comics. Such as thought bubbles or a bonus page at the end of each of volume/chapter where you can share some extra details of the characters profile or after thoughts.

Most people take over a year to release a single chapter/volume these days, so it's nice to see someone release a whole volume at once.
However, if you feel releasing single pages will improve the storey or look, don't let time ruin your work and release them when you are satisfied with end results, you can always re-release rework pages later. :)

Keep up the good work and do your best! <3 No one hates you! <3 Stay with us! :3
Posted on 20 December 2017, 16:57 by:   Stahlhelm    PM
Score +1
Thanks for the manga, I really liked it. The art style and story were good. The translation was easy to understand too, although I hope that the story won't be getting darker. I hope that the teacher and student can remain lovers. Thanks :).
Posted on 20 December 2017, 17:09 by:   ilovecandAL    PM
Score +5
don't quit! there will always be bashers and haters but there are people who appreciates and likes your work too including me. art and translation is fine.
Posted on 20 December 2017, 20:48 by:   svines85    PM
Score +14
Yup, damned good stuff, I do like slutty, crossdressing little bottom boys, thanks a lot for all the hard work and sharing, it's a great one :)
Posted on 21 December 2017, 01:10 by:   saiox    PM
Score +12
I think part of the reason for negative ratings is because this is soft core (no genitalia is shown) a lot of people come here fap not read a short story with some lewd elements.
Posted on 21 December 2017, 03:22 by:   BlueArremer    PM
Score +6
People hate this shit? Fuck em, this is pretty quality.
Posted on 21 December 2017, 13:03 by:   souloon    PM
Score +6
I really like it. It's just have a bit more story than usual porn and that's why it's not as popular. Some people really don't like porn in their stories, and stories in their porn. I think world need more of works like kanojo-gokko, or yours. Just for diversity , you do have loyal group of fans and that what counts.

There is also one other thing i have shown litmus to my tg friends ( i am ts myself i mean real one, hormones and such i can even show you myself if you feel so inclined) and they love it and asked when the next chapter is coming. So yeah it's different but there are some audience whose hearts are really captured.
Posted on 22 December 2017, 14:02 by:   suratkabar    PM
Score -1
eeeehhhh you're fine really, people will hate for the sake of hating, or being edgy or they hate gay stuff in general.
like really, you're fine on both the artwork, stories and sex scenes, it's fine to continue this series.
and just remember if there's something that people hate then there's also people that like that same stuff and vice versa.
Posted on 25 December 2017, 16:05 by:   bulrog099    PM
Score +53
Sometimes people just don't like something, complaining isn't going to change it
Posted on 26 December 2017, 02:27 by:   valdam    PM
Score +11
Thank you for cheerful replies. I released my stressful mind made by many haters.
@souloon : are you really tg? . I want to know real tg's looking or feelings about my comic. check your mail please.
thanks.
Posted on 04 January 2018, 03:04 by:   sammysolo    PM
Score +6
I really like it. I have it saved to "The Good Stuff" on my favorites. Please keep at it.

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