my 3rd translation work.
Lana is so cute that I just feel like translating it.
support the author if you can.
raw:https://e-hentai.org/g/1120015/6775d40d04/

if you proved yourself in battlefield, you got your own personal harem
jeez, no wonder they are so strong

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The ones that prove themselves the strongest in battle get to breed. From an evolutionary standpoint and the environment the story takes place in makes perfect sense. With a population reaching over 10 billion pretty soon I think current humanity could benefit greatly from this. Only those proven physically and mentally superior should be allowed to breed. It's not an empathetic image but it is defiantly pragmatic. Needless to say I wouldn't be breeding in this scenario .

P.S. I keep on hitting those nerves.

Last edited on 07 January 2018, 11:54.

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True question is, would he be able to resist against the op orcs?

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@ cloudbill
You wouldn't be breeding in any scenario.

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@ cloudbill
Yeah, ok Elliot Rodger.

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I am a little uncertain of why the boy thinks he needs to "save" his nee-san. From the very beginning, we see that this tradition is generally accepted by the others in the village and the nee-san in question does not even have mixed feelings about it, she accept it from the very beginning and showed no discontent. So in this case, the whiny boy really is just a whiny boy rather than a sympathetic whiny boy. In fact, I would go as far as say that this boy is just selfish and delusional for thinking that the girl belongs to him and that he needs to "save" her.

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Oh hey Heihachi, since when did you start starring in hentai doujins?

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What was the point of the brother going there? He didnt do jack shit.

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This felt a little bit incomplete...like it just ended, maybe it is because the boy was just there without doing anything. Maybe we will get a sequel where he is finally the strongest warrior and he gets his own harem and maybe he finally gets his sister at the end of her breeding period...oh well, the sex was great.

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OH BOY IT'S FINALLY HERE!!!! *unzips*

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wish it was more pages

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Thanks for the translation. Is it just me, or does this not really feel like ntr to anyone else?

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@Rumcock, yeah, this isn't NTR at all. I'm voting the tag down.

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thanks for the hard work, this is nice.
I noticed some little things.

page 8:
-"recieve"
-the 3rd bubble before the last shouldn't be empty.

page 13:
the two bubbles from the last (non-sfx ones) should be in alphabets at least.

page 16:
-second box: "fof"
-1st bubble: "aight"

page 19:
-1st bubble: this is optional, but maybe "my my" will be better compared to keeping "yare yare".

page 23:
again, the three last bubble (non-sfx ones) should at least be in alphabets.

also, the raw was 4000px with a total size of 35.8 megs.
this one is 2105px but the total size is 86.9 megs.
why is that?

Last edited on 07 January 2018, 19:38.

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Would be so much better without the brother
Adds a taste of NTR that ruins the whole comic

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you know, that boy just could accepted the fact that he has a hero as a brother in law and that he has become an uncle

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So what exactly is the purpose of adding the brother to the story? Are we going to see a sequel where one of the girls cheats with him? Or where he becomes the strongest warrior?

Last edited on 08 January 2018, 14:14.

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The boy merely represents your typical incest fag. Betas.

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The boy seems to be a part of the same tribe as everyone. Maybe the sequel will show that he was just a late bloomer and he'll fuck all of the bitches when he's a big strong new hero?

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Dang nice doujin. To conventional modern standards this might seem terrible, but it's actually reasonable considering the setting and circumstances. Seeing as the tribe is constantly at war with monsters or being mercs, I'm guessing the attrition rate of men is pretty high. With said attrition rate there's bound to be more females than males.

One thing though, I feel like the brother was kinda misplaced? Why did he feel that way when no one else thought of their ways as strange? It would have been a lot more tragic if the brother was instead a potential lover, and Lana was torn apart from him because of their traditions. However Lana looked like she was completely fine with the arrangement, and as a brother he had no claim on her. I was expecting an epilouge where it's years later and the brother becomes a new hero, then realizes that the traditions of his people are that way for a reason and gets his own harem.

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If this gets a sequel I'm pretty sure it will be ntr which makes sense why the brother character is introduced the way he is.

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okay since the hero is ugly as fuck of course the girls are beauties right so probably in the 3rd or 4th generation of his son he would be handsome on some point. (hero looks like heihachi mishima)

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The whole point of the story is that the boy wants to become a warrior to get his own harem.

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