I took the images from Sandlust's game, BIG BROTHER and used them to create a new story. I hope you like it.

https://www.patreon.com/sandlustgames

Part 1
https://e-hentai.org/g/1171602/5bc69574b1/
Part 2
https://e-hentai.org/g/1174182/568da57e46/

This story is amazing and I just can't wait for Part 4, 5 and many more! BUT, if you look at this page for example (https://e-hentai.org/s/5e0a6cc7ad/1175651-12) there are just to many text balloons.... for my liking.
Is there a way that You can divide those text balloons into 2 separate pages? Thumbs up for a fantastic performance!!

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Thanks for the comment. It’s a valid criticism. That’s something that I struggle with. I’m limited by the number of images. For instance, the page you cited is all one image. I hate seeing the exact same image in multiple pages just for dialogue. I try not to cram too many speech bubbles there, but occasionally there’s no way around it.

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This is much better than playing the game tbh. No grinding.

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Keep up the good work dude love this story so far.

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The feminist bullshit in this comic is strong.

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[Part 1]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1171602/5bc69574b1/
[Part 2]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1174182/568da57e46/
[Part 3]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1175651/e07c564dfb/
[Part 4]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1181284/ece322c6f0/
[Part 5]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1187944/e12f9bcf44/
[Part 6]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1213015/0801f27c00/
[Part 7]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1363652/535521da51/
[Part 8]: https://e-hentai.org/g/1510273/5ea866646d/

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(Sandlust) Big Brother (Part 01-10) (English)

Part 01 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1171602/5bc69574b1/
Part 02 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1174182/568da57e46/
Part 03 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1175651/e07c564dfb/
Part 04 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1181284/ece322c6f0/
Part 05 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1187944/e12f9bcf44/
Part 06 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1213015/0801f27c00/
Part 07 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1363652/535521da51/
Part 08 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1510273/5ea866646d/
Part 09 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1613558/2dd5e677c7/
Part 10 ➔ https://e-hentai.org/g/1564268/93e420a575/

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