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Shit , this was hilarious.

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Is there a reason man>woman gender bender stories immediately assume that the entire female body is a huge erogenous zone?

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And a proud succubus was born!.

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@CDub7888 It's more about knowing what the end goal for the doujin is. Obviously it's not realistic, but it also doesn't have to be- it caters to the fetish to be overwhelmed by sexual pleasure, and that makes it *way* hotter. In the end, these types of doujins are meant to be fap material, and to that end it works marvelously. More story-based smut tends to be more realistic in its portrayal of the female body, but that also caters to the story-based aspect much better.

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This really needs a part two.
A Incubus/succubus is still a demon and should lose that easily - how about all the guys in the train fucked senseless and she now gets some revenge-yuri?

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How to break an Incubus.

Turn him into a succubus.

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Well the original stories says that it goes FTM for a Succubus and Incubus

The Succubus.became an Incubus by having sex with a man and became an Incubus to impregnate a woman

Anyway A Reverse of The Concept is a lot better

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I'm not sure what fun there is in having the protagonist be a sex demon if they're going to react to getting fucked in the exact same way most protagonists do. I'd think they'd be way more energized after all that, rather than be totally stupefied like that.

Also, just once can the protag NOT let themselves get helplessly raped on a train? There's a million stories just like this. It's boring.

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So the plan was hoping there'd be a rapist on the train?

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Great art, but the plot itself was a bit too simplistic.

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this would be 1000x better if that instead of just getting raped the potagonist would just go crazy from the male smell on the train idk and go on a complete cock rampage. sucking and fucking every man and woman on that train dry.

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Can't beat the cock.

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I probably would've enjoyed the story more, if I knew why and how the woman we never get to see turned the protagonist into a girl (and knew in advance that he would be raped on the train to wherever she was waiting for him).

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