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That's just fucked

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A short can be made in less than 5 pages.

You on the other hand...Can not.
This is not a comic, this is crap.
If you want to make a short comic you should strive for 6-8 pages.
One of the biggest problems for artists who want graphic stories is that they try to force it out in too few pages too fast.
I see no proof reading, a lack of character depth and a lack of logical story progression.

Now this has me wondering, did he put that sign there in the first place, prior to the start of the comic?
Did he scope out the bathrooms looking for an opening like this or was it a convenient duce ex machina coincidence? :/

Also has me wondering, couldn't this guy wait till she was done pissing first and not have her piss all over everything as he tackled her or was it planned that way to cause humiliation later and then silence?

Really?!? in the open?! What female pisses in the open?!
She's not even near the bushes trying to reduce the sight angles of herself.

I know this is a pretty fucked up comic, but you are going to have to give me something to work with here to justify it being called more than just a few pages of rushed plot and art.
You have some explaining to do between pages 1 and 2 as well as between 2 and 3.

and what's up with the sister?! (Hey sis, I'm gonna go rape someones kid, watch my kid for me) (Sis is like (sure)) WTF?! o.O

"I like rape"...........Congratulations, you made something so stupid my brain had to turn off it's higher functions to accept it's existence through laughter....No, I am not laughing with you. I am laughing AT you. (How can anyone make something this stupid?)

Last edited on 18 February 2018, 11:56.

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Exactly, there is no plot or logic or morals or brains in this comic

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I think this a continuation of the incestuous love the artist made. So, that's their kid.

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"Actually feels good. I like rape. Thanks, Mister" 10/10 dialogue. Ten out of Frickin' Ten *slow clap*

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i got a 90% boost in autism looking at that last page

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Hey, don't smear us autistics with this shit. We want no part of this.

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1. That's not how it should, would or ever will work
2. I dare you to do that in real life where in the end the girl says "I like rape" on her own free will

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You horrible bastard.

TEACH ME.

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