By Cyrusphyshor. Source at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20715318/

5 stars
TF sin #1 pointless clothing ripping from TF, -2 stars for each article of clothing pointlessly destroyed.
Shoes where slip ons, could easily have slipped off...Surprised they did not before the TF. :P -4stars
Shirts.....FKing really?! She hardly changed her physical dimensions enough to even come close to ripping those shirts and there are 2 of them and brest bindings are made with shirts that are too small all the time, making it that much less believable. -4 stars
Pants, Believable for the thighs portion is believable, which is why I will not count that against the TF sin score....But where did they go? she somehow took them off between falling and getting landed on with the pressure building up enough to rip the pants? BS Otherwise she would have taken them off before they ripped! I take it back. Pants added to the sin counter. -2 stars

Star score-10 stars
+1/2 star for decent art
+1/2 for at least 5 pages
+1/2 star for story continuity.

Current score -7 1/2 stars.
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This comic has potential in a remake.
Pointless clothing rippage is pet peeve of mine.

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..the sweet blood...it sings to me

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