More work at https://www.furaffinity.net/user/vonboche/

Isn't rape a reason? :/
Despite this being disturbing it is reasonably put together... Though unrealistic in daylight and aside from the rape... Definitely without reason.
... Maybe believable in New York central park at night...

I'll give it 4 stars for decent art, for being 5+ pages, having a somewhat coherent plot and progression (Barely).

Be nice to see the story get some reason after the rape part and have the two victims find comfort amongst each other. ;3

Base +5, oneiwonder +7, 1qazqaz +7

3 stars because good art but i am not OK whit rape of children

Base +5, akoldon -6