Language:Japanese ??? WTF?

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'your to big'.

Okay.

Base +7

nobody's going to point out the why the story is marked as mind control and not rape and slave? Where is the hypnotism? All I saw was a man barking order at a slave, force himself on her and boom, one pooned bitch. Where's the suggestion? Where's the hypno freaky action? I don't think the author really understand what hypnotism is....

Base +7, Rylon +6, InvisibleProvidence +3, smileyrat +6, RobDollar +6

I guess that little line going through her head on the first page was meant to represent that she was hypnotized... but there's a few problems with that. One, she was already calling him master before that. Two, we see no indication that it changes her behavior in any way. She's meek and submissive before, and she's meek and submissive after. Even her eyes going to pin-points doesn't work as a cue, because we don't see her eyes before, and it's only in the last page that we see them any other way. Three... this is a bit like a transformation comic where it's some random character that we've never seen before, but are told by the title has been transformed, but has only minor indications at any point that they are transformed. Hypnotism and transformation are quite similar in that part of the fun is in seeing the change... seeing the contrast between before and after. Without that contrast, it just doesn't work.

The art style is pretty decent, but it just kind of winds up uninspired. Luke warm.

Base +7, smileyrat +6

I wish there was more to this...

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